Reviews for Harry Potter and the Aftermath
Rune Tobor chapter 16 . 9/27/2021
Sugar is fine but energy drinks?
Many "energy" drinks are ZERO CALORIE thus they contain NO ENERGY!

Try coffee with sugar, or tea with honey.
Lerris chapter 22 . 8/25/2021
I don't think this is a favorite, though its also not far from one either. Obviously with what the reader knows about future events in the this universe, he might have been better to keep the immortality, but, well, the decision made sense from his current knowledge.

One thing I see quite often is the battle won followed shortly by the end. I'm not quite sure how to proceed past some of these, but things like magic being obviously and continually exposed would likely have more long term consequences that are left unknown. Put another way, politicians, particularly those on the right just absolutely love to find an enemy they can blame everything on, thus making gaining and keeping power quite easy since if everything is the fault of the enemy then they have no actual responsibility to solve problems.. Heck they could even blame their own crimes on wizards, since they could just point to the imperious curse and claim they were under it. I suppose my overall point is, there is potentially more to the story. I may try to write it sometime, if I can make it something others might want to read.

Either way, overall, this is well done. Thanks for writing.
Guest chapter 22 . 7/28/2021
Quite entertaining. Thanks for writing this.
Guestinator chapter 8 . 7/25/2021
Again, nothing changed. Why write a copy/paste of a movie? To show you can add a entirely different universe into the mix and magically make nothing truly change or matter? That is impressive if that was what you were going for.
Guestinator chapter 6 . 7/25/2021
So nothing changes and Harry not only gets instantly found out but had his own spell bitch slap him down. Wow. This is... Wow.
Guest chapter 8 . 7/24/2021
Not really sure what the point of this fic is. Harry just seems to be there and nothing actually changes. Hell, you're even quoting huge chunks of the movies because everything is more or less exactly the same.
LnDrive chapter 22 . 7/14/2021
Interesting story…it kinda turns halfway through. There are several plot lines that are well written, and entertaining though don’t seem to have much impact on the story as a whole. The whole other Pestilence vs Death could have made a fantastic story on its own but kinda felt shoved into this one. Same thing with the Rabistan Lestrange arc. Interesting premise but think you tried to take the story in a few too many directions.
Rune Tobor chapter 22 . 7/5/2021
Different in that you skip Thanos and the Idiot Rocks. Marvel is a mess of stupidly overpowered junk.
Too bad chapter 18 . 6/11/2021
Well, it was great until this chapter.
But the new direction is a big NO for me...
slytherinlibrarymole chapter 16 . 4/23/2021
the ending to this chapter is just supercalifragilisticexpialledociously splendiferous! Like, joust wow. *no words. Except for the ones I already typed.*
Lordlexx chapter 2 . 4/4/2021
In both Marvel and DC, Death is a female. Or rather takes on a female persona. I can't see a good reason to change this.
Mastersgtjames chapter 6 . 3/18/2021
yea.. I'm done with this story. MC comes across as an unmotivated limpwristed dropout. He does nothing to advance his education or learn more about magic. Even after finding himself immortal he just leaves it to Hermione. Now he is just letting other people make decisions for him and does not stand up for himself. I mean, the Easiest argument in the world for not going along with "muggle" control. or revealing yourself to them is that it is against the law. That there were systematic genocides perpetrated against wizards throughout history. This just comes across as weak and sticking to canon when it shouldn't.
Mastersgtjames chapter 3 . 3/18/2021
Apparently Harry, after the childhood he had, with his enemies, and after a WAR... either knows nothing about Wards or simply does not bother with them. Both seem pretty dumb. Cuz Tony should not have been able to get inside his house.
Mastersgtjames chapter 2 . 3/18/2021
this story would be better if MC was at least a little interested in learning new magic. Wards, Enchantment, etc. I mean, come one dude... magic...
N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 22 . 12/23/2020
Is there going to be a sequel to this?
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