Reviews for Harry Potter and the Aftermath |
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![]() ![]() ![]() An honest to goodness completed fic with nothing to complicated and mostly everything covered. Truly ffn needs more of that. Kudos author-san, this has been an enjoyable read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() sad but quick ending for which I'm glad and Kudos for Luna "A sad man" hit me deep for some reason |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol poor Steve |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nah like fr niw that's just getting careless tho admittedly when u can't even stay dead, no point in being careful...until u get sealed for the forst time cause you weren't alive to defend yourself lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn! That foreshadowing sure got me riled up. i mean it started alright then went dark real quick. i liked how the span of years didn't feel rushed(good job on the narration). |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed the story, though I have mixed feelings about him giving up the Hallows so soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() about Hogwarts' name and who to ask: Neville may be a good person too, not that Harry would realize until someone told him this- it's apparently a flower/plant, though spelled slightly differently. Hogwort aka Woolly Croton. (now whether that is an in-universe reference or a meta-reference by the author's love of plant names I couldn't say) |
![]() ![]() Stations of canon YAAAAWWWNNNNNN |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story and a unique plot. Thanks for writing and sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() just... uff... ugh.. *blows kisses**Italian chef kisses* bloody brilliant it was |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really liked the story! Feels like there aren't as many of this kind of more contained stories being made. Glad I read it again, and thanks for writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry's just running about bungling things up again. He could have just taken the scepter and interrogated Loki to find the tesseract. He only answers to Death. Let Shield whine all they want, he's beyond their authority. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another dissapointing Harry. He lived in America for 4 years and didn't come up with a counter to guns? An enchanted item to block or vanish bullets would work easily. Or personal wards to do the same. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why are you randomly interchanging between first and second person bruh! And people find mistakes in my fanfictions! I'm loads better than this! Secondly, Sanskrit being the deaths language. I'm an Indian, an Indian who has taken Sanskrit as an optional subject for 6 years in school so i know pretty well about Sanskrit. And let me tell you..first of all there are languages older than Sanskrit itself and second the spells you used in sanskrit weren't spells at all. They were literal translations of the elements like fire 'agni', air 'pavana' etc..Sanskrit words would have been dope if you used them like spells not like translations. But we'll not everyone is well versed in sanskrit so I can't complain about it. It's not a great fiction, because harry seems to have no affect on timeline! It's going as it was in the movies with just harry slapped over it. But considering there are hardly 1.6 k completed Harry x Avengers fanfictions, of which many are rubbish and the good ones are already read by me, I'll say it's decent. You can read if you are desperate harry Potter and Avengers fan but other than that I don't see why would you waste time on this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite interesting story. Death was hilarious and I always adore Harry/Tony friendship. |