Reviews for Harry Potter and the Aftermath
TheChild0fHades chapter 15 . 2/22/2022
BAHAHAHAHA YEAH THAT IS VERY IMPORTNANT INFO TO KNOW GDSHJAGDJSA. As a dutch person I know very well that those two have very different purposes lmaoo. Literally burst out laughing when I read that oml
Guest chapter 17 . 11/26/2021
A seriously weird development, author, but I'll take it over the Ultron crap. Ultron sucks.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/26/2021
Having an immortal protagonist already half killed all tension the story will attempt to have. Let's hope the writing will at least be entertaining as our hero goes through the motions while having no real stakes, author.
RatherFabulous chapter 21 . 11/14/2021
Lol, I don’t know about Sorcerer’s Cave, but I think World of Warcraft might have snuck in here. You had litch plague dispersers scattered around.
RatherFabulous chapter 7 . 11/12/2021
Yes, this was written a lifetime ago, so I'm basically necroing a thread, but I hadda say...
I couldn't "place" Death, but now I can clearly hear him.
Death is played by Michael Caine. (He sounds just like Alfred in "Batman Begins".)
TheStrangeNessie chapter 6 . 10/27/2021
This just seems like a story where Harry has all these powers but can’t / won’t use them. He just gets his ass kicked.
Rune Tobor chapter 16 . 9/27/2021
Sugar is fine but energy drinks?
Many "energy" drinks are ZERO CALORIE thus they contain NO ENERGY!

Try coffee with sugar, or tea with honey.
Lerris chapter 22 . 8/25/2021
I don't think this is a favorite, though its also not far from one either. Obviously with what the reader knows about future events in the this universe, he might have been better to keep the immortality, but, well, the decision made sense from his current knowledge.

One thing I see quite often is the battle won followed shortly by the end. I'm not quite sure how to proceed past some of these, but things like magic being obviously and continually exposed would likely have more long term consequences that are left unknown. Put another way, politicians, particularly those on the right just absolutely love to find an enemy they can blame everything on, thus making gaining and keeping power quite easy since if everything is the fault of the enemy then they have no actual responsibility to solve problems.. Heck they could even blame their own crimes on wizards, since they could just point to the imperious curse and claim they were under it. I suppose my overall point is, there is potentially more to the story. I may try to write it sometime, if I can make it something others might want to read.

Either way, overall, this is well done. Thanks for writing.
Guest chapter 22 . 7/28/2021
Quite entertaining. Thanks for writing this.
Guestinator chapter 8 . 7/25/2021
Again, nothing changed. Why write a copy/paste of a movie? To show you can add a entirely different universe into the mix and magically make nothing truly change or matter? That is impressive if that was what you were going for.
Guestinator chapter 6 . 7/25/2021
So nothing changes and Harry not only gets instantly found out but had his own spell bitch slap him down. Wow. This is... Wow.
Guest chapter 8 . 7/24/2021
Not really sure what the point of this fic is. Harry just seems to be there and nothing actually changes. Hell, you're even quoting huge chunks of the movies because everything is more or less exactly the same.
LnDrive chapter 22 . 7/14/2021
Interesting story…it kinda turns halfway through. There are several plot lines that are well written, and entertaining though don’t seem to have much impact on the story as a whole. The whole other Pestilence vs Death could have made a fantastic story on its own but kinda felt shoved into this one. Same thing with the Rabistan Lestrange arc. Interesting premise but think you tried to take the story in a few too many directions.
Rune Tobor chapter 22 . 7/5/2021
Different in that you skip Thanos and the Idiot Rocks. Marvel is a mess of stupidly overpowered junk.
Too bad chapter 18 . 6/11/2021
Well, it was great until this chapter.
But the new direction is a big NO for me...
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