Reviews for Harry Potter and the Aftermath
Guest chapter 6 . 7/24/2020
Omg I love the fight scene!
Guest chapter 6 . 7/24/2020
Oh wow! Harry is so stupid in this chapter! Death practically gave him a clue and he didn't even do anything substantial but gawk! Anyways, I love the story so far!
Chris chapter 2 . 7/12/2020
A magical private invesrigator in chicago, named Harry, hmmm i wonder who that reminds me of!
christinemarie13 chapter 22 . 7/8/2020
I wanted to thank you for all your hard work and for sharing. While the storyline wasn’t always my favorite, It’s at least something that combines two fandoms I’ve been into lately that are a bit harder to find crossovers for that isn’t so poorly written as to be unreadable (fanfiction can be the wild west when it comes to spelling, grammar and story development). Also, I wanted to say how disgusting I thought some of the reviewers were. No matter how you feel about a story name calling is unacceptable. I’m sure it can be discouraging when people are downright nasty. Try not to let the haters get you down. If you enjoy writing then don’t let their negativity keep you from it.
Language nerd chapter 6 . 6/3/2020
Sanskrit is most assuredly not the “first language” it is a product of Indo-Aryan which comes from Indo-European.
Matt chapter 9 . 4/15/2020
Or you could have used beseeching. That's probably what you did - combined imploring and beseeching and got impeaching.
Matt chapter 9 . 4/15/2020
Imploring them to open the window, not impeaching. Impeaching means to call the validity of something into question or to charge someone with treason or misconduct. That's not what the owl was doing. You need to look these words up in a dictionary before you use them.
Guest chapter 3 . 1/17/2020
I can't help wondering why harry doesn't use muggle hair dyes to put some grey in his hair or use stick on beards and moustaches to help with looking older. And since when are glamour spells hard to support? I think you're making his immortality as hard to bear as his normal life has been so far. Give the guy a break!
Centaurious chapter 6 . 12/22/2019
I don't understand this Harry of yours. He doesn't know transfiguration, he can barely do Glamors but he got into the Aurors and his primary battle spell is Sectumsempra a dark spell which I'll bet he never learned the counter to.

Giving up on this !IdiotHarry story.
KnowInsight chapter 22 . 12/14/2019
Great story. I really liked your Death and the quiting being Master of Death. Clever. Thanks.
Bad Wolf chapter 22 . 11/21/2019
In a previous review, I stated that the horsemen twist made this story no longer my kind of story. I stand corrected. Very well done indeed!
Bad Wolf chapter 18 . 11/21/2019
I was absolutely with you this story... right up until it became a horsemen story. This new direction just seems to take something special away from the story. Don't get me wrong, it's still really well done, just different from the types of stories I usually like to rear.
k.cadamban chapter 8 . 10/18/2019
I liked the story till you spouted about Sanskrit being the first language.
Jestersky98 chapter 5 . 10/12/2019
just drop it if you need to follow canon with just your shitty different pov
Jestersky98 chapter 4 . 10/12/2019
If this Harry is gonna be abitch and not be able to talk for himself or actually stand up to Shield then this is just gonna be a huge disappointment
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