Reviews for If You're Gone
Artificial Life Creator chapter 7 . 4/4/2013
Pardon me while I go gather up the little bits and pieces of my shattered heart *sob*
Artificial Life Creator chapter 6 . 4/4/2013
Re #2: yes pleased,
Artificial Life Creator chapter 5 . 4/4/2013
Fifth author's note is hilarious.
Artificial Life Creator chapter 4 . 4/4/2013
Omg, poor Jane!
Artificial Life Creator chapter 3 . 4/4/2013
Artificial Life Creator chapter 2 . 4/4/2013
OMG YOU WROTE STRAYS? I love that story! I wonder if I ever reviewed it...

Anywho, I noticed a few of your sentences were lacking in initial capitals, and the big sore thumb that kinda irked me was that Jane should be referred to as 'Doctor Foster' because she does have her doctorate.

But onward!
Artificial Life Creator chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Fifth paragraph: "*It's alright..."

And when the day comes that Jane's mad at everyone in the universe ESPECIALLY the God of Thunder, things will get mighty interesting...
robbtheon chapter 7 . 11/23/2012
idrathernot4 chapter 5 . 8/8/2012
Double dates are rarely a good idea. Poor Jane.
Novelist N Training chapter 4 . 8/4/2012
I never pictured Jane as the scandalous type. I'm sort of giving props to Thor for that. Good chapter.
Novelist N Training chapter 3 . 8/4/2012
There is always danger owning a cat. I have scratch marks to prove it. Poor Darcy, I can totally see her being a dog person
Novelist N Training chapter 2 . 8/4/2012
Darcy as a fangirl is going to have me laughing for ages. I am totally able to see her and him having awesome 'breaking the rules for science' adventures. I wonder how Loki's going to come in
Novelist N Training chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
I never really thought about if Thor came back, then Darcy would be stuck with a lot of the work. But now that it's been pointed out, I can't not see it. Good first chapter. You write for Jane really well
miss nen yim chapter 4 . 7/21/2012
Hilarious! I loved it! Typical Jane being too distracted with other things to notice a huge hickey! I love littl things like that which indicate mug naughtier activities! Great update, thanks!
anon chapter 4 . 7/18/2012
Cute. You'd think Darcy would have told her before they left she had a giant hickey. ;0) That's what friends are for. lol
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