|Reviews for These Silent Moments|
| crystalblue19 chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
That was cute. :3
| Gearhead Fenton chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Awwww akdhskdn sooo cute
| ILikeShorts chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Like you pretty much said yourself, it does fit the mold of the typical Volkner/Jasmine story. The lighthouse, the sea... all the usual stuff is there. But I think that sort of atmosphere is a huge part of why so many people find this pairing so romantic and just generally perfect, so, in a way, it almost makes sense to write it like that.
In short, yes, it's a cliche, but it's a cliche that works, and I don't particularly mind reading more of it. That's my take on it, anyway. And you did a lovely job with the descriptions, so the whole concept comes across quite well here. So, not the most original thing in the world, but enjoyable nonetheless. :)
Also, one little correction that jumped out at me: Sunyshore has one N. (I know, it totally looks like it should have two, doesn't it?)
| TheLoadingScreen chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Meh, it's fine, but Morty was mentioned kinda randomly, and no explanation was given for Volkner being at the lighthouse.
Jasmine was in character, but Volkner was a little OOC, since...you know, I thought he was more energetic than that, but never mind.
Lucky it didn't end with them kissing...THAT would be cliched. But the story ended kind of open...
Okay story. Read a lot of fluff, never actually wrote any though.
| Pure Gamer chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
To me, this was pretty good. The description was very deep. It was impressive.
I think you did a good job of connecting them, that's something I have failed to do time and time again.
Although one thing confused me, you called Volkner a Steel Type Leader, and then later Electric Type Leader. I'm assuming that was an error?
Keep writing, this was great.