|Reviews for What Was Left After|
| Shadow Cat17 chapter 21 . 1/23/2014
I really enjoyed reading this and I loved Jack's teacher!
| DawnoftheNutter chapter 5 . 7/18/2013
Just one thing. In the first chapter that baby's eyes are a "deep dark brown." Now, they are a light blue...
| ValaEnVash chapter 19 . 7/8/2013
I really don't want this story to end in two chapters... i want it to go on for lots more... :(
| ValaEnVash chapter 8 . 7/8/2013
"Sherlock's got a pig in a jar. I saw it. A baby pig. I named him Wiggle."
That's my new favorite line of anything in this story so far. Wiggle! HA!
| ValaEnVash chapter 2 . 7/8/2013
Oh god that was the most precious chapter ever in lifes. yes, lifes.
| Kris chapter 21 . 4/26/2013
awww! Very sweet.
| Opy chapter 21 . 3/6/2013
Wonderful job, I really enjoyed it! Would love to read a continuing story!
| Heather chapter 7 . 3/5/2013
"If you find yourself needing to fake your own death again anytime soon Sherlock, don't hesitate to contact me. I'm quite capable of making people disappear." Love it!
| Halane chapter 21 . 3/4/2013
That was one long reading I had to do, the 21 chapters all at once! XD
Since there was so much to comment and I don't want to make you say "dull" and skip the review, I will just make a little list (without colours or colaboration, sorry...):
1- I have to admit I didn't like the idea at first, because I just can't see Irene and Moriarty having an affair. I liked the kid, and I think it was a clever way to get him into the universe, but I can't see it happening... Sorry!
2- I love your Sherlock. He is cold and oblivious enough, without coming out as cruel. Very IC.
3- The best about this fanfic, in my view, is how you carry the John-Sherlock relationship slowly into a couple without sex. And how Sherlock slowly walks towards phisical romantic contact. I agree that he would refuse to have sex for a long time, and even to kissing. He is not completely comfortable with touching.
4- Jack is so cute! Sometimes he seems a little weird for his age (writing kids is always so difficult...), but since he is who he is, it works perfetly.
5- I couldn't stop laughing at the thought of Anthea with all those Ikea projects. Poor thing... I'd like to see a little Mycroft-Anthea happening. A little more...
I loved the fanfic O Thank you for sharing!
| thetravelinglemon chapter 21 . 3/2/2013
Aww, this is a really good idea :)
| Doni chapter 21 . 3/2/2013
| Linebreaker chapter 21 . 3/2/2013
So, so, so, so, so absolutely, stunningly brilliant. My pathetic, tired review (after machine-gunning all 21 chapters at 2am) cannot express how much I truly loved this fic and everyone in it. Your John and Sherlock are amazing, Mycroft is darling, and Jack is so devastatingly charming that I want to just pick him up and squeeze him every time that I read his name. Sometimes he would say or do something and I would find myself giggling uncontrollably at how absolutely perfect he was.
This whole story was a welcome relief from the crap-tastic short stories that I've been editing for the past few days, so all I can really say is, "Thank you so much!" I can also say, with total conviction, that this is one of the best fanfics I've read in a very long time and I am eagerly awaiting anything more with this particular universe! Cheers!
| brandijoy chapter 21 . 3/1/2013
| vivelabookworm chapter 21 . 3/1/2013
This chapter just made my afternoon! It was so horrible (a great lunch with my sister ruined by a migraine), but this cheered me right up. Thank you so much!
| Doni chapter 20 . 2/21/2013
Very nicely done. The idea of the list is rather sweet once you move on from the 'normal' part if it.