Reviews for What Was Left After
Shadow Cat17 chapter 21 . 1/23/2014
I really enjoyed reading this and I loved Jack's teacher!
DawnoftheNutter chapter 5 . 7/18/2013
Just one thing. In the first chapter that baby's eyes are a "deep dark brown." Now, they are a light blue...
ValaEnVash chapter 19 . 7/8/2013
I really don't want this story to end in two chapters... i want it to go on for lots more... :(
ValaEnVash chapter 8 . 7/8/2013
"Sherlock's got a pig in a jar. I saw it. A baby pig. I named him Wiggle."
That's my new favorite line of anything in this story so far. Wiggle! HA!
ValaEnVash chapter 2 . 7/8/2013
Oh god that was the most precious chapter ever in lifes. yes, lifes.
Kris chapter 21 . 4/26/2013
awww! Very sweet.
Opy chapter 21 . 3/6/2013
Wonderful job, I really enjoyed it! Would love to read a continuing story!
Heather chapter 7 . 3/5/2013
"If you find yourself needing to fake your own death again anytime soon Sherlock, don't hesitate to contact me. I'm quite capable of making people disappear." Love it!
Halane chapter 21 . 3/4/2013
That was one long reading I had to do, the 21 chapters all at once! XD
Since there was so much to comment and I don't want to make you say "dull" and skip the review, I will just make a little list (without colours or colaboration, sorry...):
1- I have to admit I didn't like the idea at first, because I just can't see Irene and Moriarty having an affair. I liked the kid, and I think it was a clever way to get him into the universe, but I can't see it happening... Sorry!
2- I love your Sherlock. He is cold and oblivious enough, without coming out as cruel. Very IC.
3- The best about this fanfic, in my view, is how you carry the John-Sherlock relationship slowly into a couple without sex. And how Sherlock slowly walks towards phisical romantic contact. I agree that he would refuse to have sex for a long time, and even to kissing. He is not completely comfortable with touching.
4- Jack is so cute! Sometimes he seems a little weird for his age (writing kids is always so difficult...), but since he is who he is, it works perfetly.
5- I couldn't stop laughing at the thought of Anthea with all those Ikea projects. Poor thing... I'd like to see a little Mycroft-Anthea happening. A little more...

I loved the fanfic O Thank you for sharing!
thetravelinglemon chapter 21 . 3/2/2013
Aww, this is a really good idea :)
Doni chapter 21 . 3/2/2013
Lovely chapter.
Linebreaker chapter 21 . 3/2/2013
So, so, so, so, so absolutely, stunningly brilliant. My pathetic, tired review (after machine-gunning all 21 chapters at 2am) cannot express how much I truly loved this fic and everyone in it. Your John and Sherlock are amazing, Mycroft is darling, and Jack is so devastatingly charming that I want to just pick him up and squeeze him every time that I read his name. Sometimes he would say or do something and I would find myself giggling uncontrollably at how absolutely perfect he was.

This whole story was a welcome relief from the crap-tastic short stories that I've been editing for the past few days, so all I can really say is, "Thank you so much!" I can also say, with total conviction, that this is one of the best fanfics I've read in a very long time and I am eagerly awaiting anything more with this particular universe! Cheers!

-Lina
brandijoy chapter 21 . 3/1/2013
Great story!
vivelabookworm chapter 21 . 3/1/2013
This chapter just made my afternoon! It was so horrible (a great lunch with my sister ruined by a migraine), but this cheered me right up. Thank you so much!
Doni chapter 20 . 2/21/2013
Very nicely done. The idea of the list is rather sweet once you move on from the 'normal' part if it.
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