Reviews for The Altomare Ace
Rosie Vulpes chapter 2 . 12/14/2015
Hmmm... does anyone know who else was in on ash being betrayed. I want to know who I will kill(sadistic smile overcoming my face as I sat, claws and teeth showing and sharpened, eyes glowing red)
Genesis boi chapter 6 . 8/13/2015
I read the rant at the start of chap 6 and I say well done what a brilliant way to respond to the pitiful twat I feel that you should be very proud of this kick ass story besides I dont see him puting out any masterpieces anyway love the storyline and its overall high quality I approve
Hm chapter 1 . 8/8/2015
Hmmm...not so sure about ash kissing a pokemon...
FullmetalKing chapter 6 . 7/25/2015
An original idea. I love the context for the corrupt league as well as the altomare ace. Well done!
Darkstar2 chapter 9 . 7/9/2015
Aww come on he isn't that smart(Mr goodshow) and no way would he see that young trainer inside that latios. And MORE CHAPTERS or CONTINUE THE STORY the max artemis romance is funny
GaryH2y chapter 10 . 4/24/2015
Dan chapter 9 . 4/8/2015
Uh oh
Dan chapter 8 . 4/8/2015
How did you like your knuckle sandwich misty
Dan chapter 5 . 4/8/2015
Awesome sauce
Dan chapter 4 . 4/8/2015
Bitter and sweet
Dan chapter 2 . 4/8/2015
Pokemon league bitches
Dan chapter 1 . 4/8/2015
I like it
Guest chapter 2 . 3/6/2015
Latias... As Ash's mate... Lemon please?
Change pikachu chapter 11 . 2/28/2015
Change pikachu back
Jedi General Pikachu chapter 1 . 1/12/2015
You should finish this version of the story along with the rewrite this version is the better of the two in my opinion
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