Reviews for Pit and Pendulum
stxrdusty chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Very sweet and well written. I loved it :)
Separate Entity chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
Ah. Maze. Ing.
IsaEldar chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
*_* really great fic! miss some more fic of this two!
Frosted Failure chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Having finished a rewatch just before reading this, I can say you brilliantly captured the feeling of the moment and the essence of the characters. Wonderful job!
FtLoShakespeare chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
That was lovely. I really enjoyed this.
cutterjohns chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Considering the fact this was your first time writing Thor's POV, I thought you did an amazing job! Everything felt very realistic and I could see this fitting into the canon. It really is sad that Jane and Thor were separated, and I think you wrote Thor's emotions very nicely. You could really feel his longing and, although we don't actually see Jane, both Thor and the readers get a pretty good idea how she's handling everything.

Everything is this story was very effective and I look forward to your next contribution to the Marvel fandom!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
I liked this so thanks for sharing. My favorite has to be the actions of Jane. Very much ic.