Reviews for The Blond Demon
DannyPhantom619 chapter 10 . 5/24
bigfan22 chapter 10 . 3/3
Excellent story. I def like the fact that you took the time to show the hard work Naruto put into his training. To me a fic becomes more bearable when he actually does hard work to get strong, and not make a thousand Kage Bunshin the week before team assignments to learn everything. I hope another update comes out soon, because I would def like to see what happens next. Since Naruto seems to have gone on the trip before the Chuunin exams, I'm curious if team 7 will still take part. Great job!
Chrisfragger chapter 10 . 2/25
This was a good fic indeed. Seems you are letting it die though? Thanks for writing it at least. Gave me a few hours of entertainment.
Chrisfragger chapter 7 . 2/25
We're not retreating! We're advancing in another direction!" - Oliver Prince Smith
Chrisfragger chapter 6 . 2/25
Man your Kakashi is pretty harsh on Naruto. I kind of understand but it's rough.
Chrisfragger chapter 3 . 2/25
Why is it treasonous? Mizuki broke THE law in front of everyone. Mizuki signed his death warrant when he called Naruto a Demon in front of the class, the teachers, the anbu. He attacked in what was OBVIOUSLY higher than gennin fashion with obvious intent to kill the child... You are not being reasonable here with this chapter.
Chrisfragger chapter 2 . 2/25
Did she not already attack Naruto. I hate Anko, she cannot just blindly attack children with Kunai and HOPE they know how to detect and evade an attack...
Chrisfragger chapter 1 . 2/24
First fic? Amazing... I was actually saddened by this chapter, in a good way. The parts where Naruto was talking to his mothers grave.
Qinetiq chapter 1 . 1/6
Surprisingly good. New author with healthy brain and deep connection to common sense is always good.
Patriota1993 chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
You need to upgrade because the rest of the chapters for updating some things to disagree, for example, have removed the part where Naruto shouts that Kyubiego is a container, and the son of Minato and yet Sakura and Sasuke in later chapters of this knowledge. You need to fix it. A similar situation is with kyunim in your updated version Sarutobi and Kakashi Naruto know about the relationship with the fox and the beginning of chapter 10 Kakashi clearly said that he did not know
- Sorry for my English, is a little coarse.
Patriota1993 chapter 10 . 12/17/2014
Musisz uaktualnić resztę rozdziałów bo z powodu aktualizacji część rzeczy się nie zgadza, na przykład usunąłeś część w której Naruto krzyczy, że jest pojemnikiem Kyubiego, i synem Minato a mimo to Sakura i Sasuke to w późniejszych rozdziałach wiedzą to. Musisz to naprawić. Podobna sytuacja jest z kyunim w twojej zaktualizowanej wersji Sarutobi i Kakashi wiedzą o związku Naruto z lisem a na początku 10 rozdziału Kakashi wyraźnie mówi, że nie wiedział
- przepraszam za mój Angielski, jest trochę toporny.
Akito Murazaki chapter 4 . 12/13/2014
Hey... It might sounds crazy but is it possible you re-write the chapters. They are not like I remember...
Lerya-chan chapter 10 . 12/11/2014
This is awesome!
Can't wait to read more!
covertpartyhat chapter 10 . 11/28/2014
This story is awesome. Love it.
ryu chapter 10 . 11/10/2014
Pleasssss actualize sooooonnn
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