Reviews for Ashes
ComicFan16 chapter 1 . 9/10
I am a stupid person and read this while listening to "River" by Josh Groban
Guest chapter 1 . 6/24
This was so amazingly written and very good tho it teared my soul apart
Nonononnono chapter 1 . 6/5
How could you! I need a sequel where they are alive. Please!
Strutsiina chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
I can totally see the picture of Steve and Tony dead, holding each others hand's, and Peter crying right next to them in my head. I just wanna cry now... Thank you for writing this. :3
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
Wow the sadness awesome job though
Sravya chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
I think the killed me.
stonygirl1999 chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Well writen, but i am so sorry to say i did not like the ending, may i suggest u make a part 2 were it turned out they were in comas or somethin plz, because i feel kinda sad about them both dying, sorry for being negative
Sherlockian12 chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
... Both. Really? I thought I could suffer through one but both... *crawls into corner and cries*
It was good though. Cupcakes for you
DoctorHunter chapter 1 . 8/19/2012

Anyways, I liked it. Faving
GrimmXEchelonXShipperXNut chapter 1 . 7/10/2012, my brain forced me to read this and I said "Okay, it won't be so bad. One dad will die and Pete and living dad will be okay...Eventually"

. HOW DARE YOU KILL OFF BOTH! *crying* Why would you do that to Pete!

...Lovely story...BUT STILL!
Xbigtimerusherx chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Im like in tears
Please post moreee
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
This was so heartbreaking
Beautifully, perfectly written
but oh so heartbreaking sdfbabhdsf I feel like crying right now.
Oh Superfamily what have you done to meeee
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
This is depressingly awesome. But at the same time Mindanao sweet.