|Reviews for The Zany World of Caboose|
| glittering wolf chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
| blue-are-violets chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Oh Caboose. I just wanna hug him to death :3
I love all your little snippets, each of them managed to bring a smile to my face. Thirty-one caused me to actually laugh aloud-something that's quite hard to do. You captured Caboose brilliantly in just a few sentences! Excellent work!
However, there seems to be a few errors. Once in a while you've got missing words or the wrong tense placed in there. Such as when you have "Lieutenant Miller done everything..." There should be a 'had' in there. Those seem to be the only problems though. You've done an excellent job in writing Caboose and even all of the others that were just briefly mentioned.
I agree! No more digging through the Halo section! We've got our own turf now!
| Warlord-Xana chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Yeah i know right! good stuff.