Reviews for Persistence
doctormadscientist chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
Okay, I haven't read this far yet, but these guys seem awesome :D
So this archer Hayato is gonna die? I better not get too attached.
In which book they debut?
TheShippingMaster chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
This is pretty adorable... And we're almost the same xD

But I don't ship MiyukiXHayato or her with jack either but I did cry and shine alot when Hayato died. He was my favourite character TTTT...

Hehe xD
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
awesome!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
I know how you feel
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
I am so happy. Like that othere girl said I cried when Hayato died. I really wanted Miyuki and Hayato to be together. I love whe people star of hating eachother an then get together. MIYUKI AND HAYATO IS WRITTEN ALL OVER ME
Falcon97 chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
XD I love it! I quite like Hayato/Miyuki, but clearly Chris Bradford didn't quite see it...I was upset when Hayato died as I really liked him.
Yeah, anyway, great fanfic :D
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
I admit, this is more the pairing I ship for Miyuki than putting her with Jack. (Although I like that too) Brilliantly funny, keep writing
Elemental Dragon Slayer chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
nice, loved the idea :D 'Ninja Girl' and 'Archer Boy' was a good touch.

(glad you don't ship jack/miyuki, i really dislike that. jack/akiko as it should be for me...)