Reviews for Out of the Blue The 79th Hunger Games
Nrrrd-Grrrl-Meg chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
Foxface for the win! Thus far, I am really enjoying your take on the end oc the Hunger Games; poor Peeta never saw his meds, Katniss bit it after Clove and a Career (Cato) didn't win. I love you.
nb1998 chapter 21 . 11/11/2012
Oh I remember the time when I liked Bailey because I saw her as an underdog like Flint, Hayley and Beryl but I guess she's got probably a better chance than anyone because no offence to Andrew but his super powers suck compared to Bailey's but I wonder who the other tributes are that have special abilities... Anyone I loved the chapter it's always nice when the POV comes back to Beryl because I think that's where your writing shines most and you're really good at writing her. I love her wittiness and although i'm sure she is going to survive the corrosive fire I have a feeling either Hayley or Flint are not going to and then poor Jack was betrayed, that was quite shocking as there can be two victors from the same district. I expect we will be seeing more of Bailey...
dxuntl3ss chapter 21 . 11/10/2012
i really loved this story before the games when it was mainly Beryl's point of view. she was the perfect charcter with such an intresting personality, so excciting to read. all of the chapters were intresting, funny and just genarly really good. but now you have got into the games the chapters have gotten quite uneventful and not really that intresting any more. it would be so much better if you did just Beryl pov and occasionaly some other major characters and not third person. the arena idea was really creative though, i love the playground thing and the way the gamemakers are sending an ironic message to all of panem! i appriciete you have school and everything, but is there any chance you could make the chapters a bit longer, more exciting but update less? thankyou, and keep writting because its awesome!:)
DA Member Hogwarts chapter 2 . 10/24/2012
You said you wanted me to review. Though you didn't say what type of review.
I could just review every chapter and say 'Hi Immy'.
Well I already reviewed chapter one and I told you I loved how you did that and changed everything.
Your writing here is as descriptive and grammatically correct as ever.
And I love the main character so far she seems to be a usual Immy character tough and rebellious. Beryl Streep though hahaha! what a mad name :)
But I am thinking I'll enjoy this story because of the characterization and of course the amazing writing. I hope I'll have time to read it all soon but expect more reviews.
nb1998 chapter 20 . 10/23/2012
Oh I kinda liked Bailey in training, infact I liked both of the district 9 tributes but now they're just really evil. I'd like to see them stick arpund though cos come on the girl has fire and that is a much better super power than Andrew's... I wonder who else has super powers? Nice chapter, I liked the third person style ans it was a nice plot.
nb1998 chapter 19 . 10/12/2012
Oh I liked the switch in point of view that was cool and I felt like we got to see another side to Hayley which was also cool. I liked her opinion on Beryl as it shows a normal person's POV and to be honest I thought the chapter was well written altogether. And the cliffhanger was great...
buizel21 chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
amazing so far
nb1998 chapter 18 . 9/27/2012
It's nice to here a different POV from the arena even if it is the pyshcopath Felix. I want him to do kinf of well though and I think it would be good if Falcon or even Heliotrope ended up killing him, but it might be him and his district partner that wins. I really like Falcon for some reason. He just completely owned Heliotrope and that was great, I wonder how Annabel died... suspicious, although I think it probably has something to do with a tribute having super powers. Well we know Andrew has and for some reason I think that boy from seven, Sam, does because he seems veery sure of himself. Great chapter all round.
skyfires chapter 18 . 9/26/2012
yay! I now own a notebook. so happy to be on the internet in private.
pooor Annabel, she musta had flying power.
nb1998 chapter 17 . 9/18/2012
I really think that your idea for the arena is really unique. Yeah people have done the kids playground once or twice but you've developed it so well with the weapons being kids toys and so on. Another great chapter and Beryl's alliance is great, the conversations with Flint are great to read and I could actually imagine it. I was quite glad no-one had died we knew but Annabel and I wonder how the district 4 boy reacted to that...
skyfires chapter 17 . 9/18/2012
Good chapter. :)
nb1998 chapter 16 . 9/7/2012
Quite glad you missed out interviews and scores but will still explain what happened later. Arena idea is really great and unique, I liked te creepy swing. I felt sorry for everyone who died but especially the persom struck by lightning because that is quite unfair. Like the alliance as well, greatchapter as always.
skyfires chapter 16 . 9/3/2012
Ohh...great writing, I love this chapter, bloodbath & hayley. i like her.
nb1998 chapter 15 . 9/2/2012
Oh it was nice to hear from Beryl again, I love how cocky she is when it comes to talking to Felix and it will be so funny to see his reaction when Beryl gets a better score than him. Anyway, I really liked Beryl's POV because she is the character I like hearing from the most. I actually felt sorry for the district 5 boy when Heliotrope said that thing. Great idea for tge Robin POV as well :)
Lya-Nym chapter 12 . 9/1/2012
Ok, not a fan of heliotrope. Seems like the stereotypical dumb blonde with not a lot of depth. I like Andrew even less; he seems like a real piece of work. Wonder what that twist is tho...
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