Reviews for You Only Live Twice
Guest chapter 7 . 10/15/2012
Y U no update great story?
CD DC chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Damn man I hope this story comes as brillantly as your others
can't wait to read the new chapters
Kazemitsu chapter 7 . 10/7/2012
I might not be a fan of my little pony...but your story amuses me. I'd like to see it continued, don't get many funny stories anymore. :)

On a critics note...I can't find anything wrong with anything. Although I do wonder what pooching out your lip means...otherwise you're doing good, bud!
Guest chapter 7 . 10/6/2012
:D Best Naruto crossover I have read so far!
AJMartin00 chapter 7 . 10/2/2012
Interesting and cool story update soon please
Guest chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Ive got to say, ive read nearly all your stories, and while i have inhibitions about reading this one, i am very interested in your writing, you are one of the few authors i admire in your length and vocabulary in writing, so i thank you
I eould have sign but i forgot my stuff
Somedude chapter 7 . 9/28/2012
This is the most interesting Naruto/MLP story I've read. I have'nt seen any errors other than one or two misspelled words. Any chance of Naruto meeting Derpy soon? Still looking forward to see if there's any romance for Naruto, maybe a Marem. Though Rainbow, Applejack or Derpy would be good for a monogamous relationship with him.
Delleren chapter 7 . 9/25/2012
I, don't really see why Naruto feels so guilty about harming the designated 'enemy'. Sure, what he did was unprofessional but still. Also, is there any reason why he's so whipped? He was a high ranking officer, it would make more sense to me if he asserted himself more consistently.

Another question, is Naruto going to spill his guts out? I've seen far to many world crossover stories, where their whole background gets vomited out to whoever is willing to listen.

Anyways, I've really enjoyed the story. Aside from those complaints you've done a wonderful job.
Diamondstar the Seeker chapter 7 . 9/24/2012
Naruto, don't blame yourself, I would have done the samething if it happens to my love ones. your story is great is made me cry
Josher chapter 7 . 9/23/2012
Nice and unique. Also you have avoided the usual mary Sue traits that normally pop up in this, well done.
Aduro Tri chapter 7 . 9/21/2012
I really hope you get the next chapter out soon, I'm really starting to like this story...also...I'm banking on Fluttershy/Naruto. Hehe.
Aduro Tri chapter 6 . 9/21/2012
...The ending...good example of how to troll.
Aduro Tri chapter 4 . 9/21/2012
...Once again, I'm impressed, and I'm a tough person to impress. As I said before, While I find ponified versions of things I like...kind of an abomination...you actually have changed my view on it. You have portrayed the MLP world in a much nicer light than others usually have. (For my tastes anyhow), its almost enough to make me want to pick up my pen and write about it too. (Although I've walked away from Fanfiction)...But I'm not sure yet. I will have to see how this story goes, I really hope you do continue to work on it.
Aduro Tri chapter 3 . 9/21/2012
...Tsunade once again saves his ass. Epic.
Aduro Tri chapter 2 . 9/21/2012
...At first when I saw this story posted, I kind of snapped...But I must admit...Its rather well done. (Not a fan of ponified versions of what I like) I wasn't expecting it to be this good. Its interesting to say the least, something new. Keep it up
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