Reviews for You Only Live Twice |
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Guest chapter 7 . 8/29/2012 Hark! I hearith the sound of a whip cracking! LOL excellent chapter. |
Tenro100 chapter 7 . 8/28/2012 awesome chapter |
Dalxein chapter 7 . 8/28/2012 Hahaha, yeah. This is another great chapter. I look forward to that next one you're working on. |
fanficreader71 chapter 7 . 8/28/2012 Good chapter, I will be looking forward to reading your next update |
RyoTheSaiyan chapter 7 . 8/28/2012 I really enjoyed this chapter. Naruto's background in Equestria is vast. I'm excited to see more. I am also anxious for the revelation of Naruto real past. Can't wait. |
Voidangel Soren chapter 7 . 8/28/2012 Always a joy to read your stories. I'll make sure to come back to this when you update. Soren |
Vitae Scholae chapter 7 . 8/28/2012 Nice to see a new chapter! I noticed some typoes. Don't know if this is the place to post them, but here goes: 1) but secrets made her head and secrets were like oil and water 2) "That's all you have to go on is a story, Rainbow. 3) ground againNaruto avoided Looking forward to the next chapter. The interaction of Naruto and Rarity are on of my favorites, I still haven't figured out what she thinks of him. |
Starving Fox chapter 7 . 8/28/2012 great stuff, I've been waiting for the next chapter and I must say that it didn't let me down. |
MyinnerDEMON17 chapter 7 . 8/28/2012 great chapter |
Voidangel Soren chapter 1 . 8/28/2012 Nice to see you doing a pony story. Pretty well done, and I see your grammar has improved greatly since I last wandered into one of your stories. No mistakes whatsoever. A good introduction, despite the slight...how to put this...slowness of the plot. For more inexperienced readers, this might be a little off-putting, but it's a welcome sight for seasoned readers, like myself, who have to endure the mainstream "Naruto gets killed and somehow winds up in Equestria" fics. Thanks for the mystery from the beginning, I'll keep going. Soren |
VenRaider chapter 7 . 8/28/2012 A much pleasurable reading. |
frytrix chapter 7 . 8/28/2012 Simply love the chapter, i dont know how you do it, but this story simple draws me in and makes me want to reread the story/chapters several times. I simply cant get enough of it. heh, keep writing, i cant wait to read more. |
Ramen junky chapter 7 . 8/28/2012 yosh! tad violent but thats what shakes things up!good job |
Rubicon373 chapter 7 . 8/28/2012 awesome chapter i look forward to the next update |
Grey mage chapter 7 . 8/28/2012 God I love this story. Have you posted this to fimfiction yet? If not, please do. Those kind folks that love pony need to know this exists. |