Reviews for You Only Live Twice
Guest chapter 7 . 8/29/2012
Hark! I hearith the sound of a whip cracking! LOL excellent chapter.
Tenro100 chapter 7 . 8/28/2012
awesome chapter
Dalxein chapter 7 . 8/28/2012
Hahaha, yeah. This is another great chapter.

I look forward to that next one you're working on.
fanficreader71 chapter 7 . 8/28/2012
Good chapter, I will be looking forward to reading your next update
RyoTheSaiyan chapter 7 . 8/28/2012
I really enjoyed this chapter. Naruto's background in Equestria is vast. I'm excited to see more.

I am also anxious for the revelation of Naruto real past.

Can't wait.
Voidangel Soren chapter 7 . 8/28/2012
Always a joy to read your stories. I'll make sure to come back to this when you update.

Soren
Vitae Scholae chapter 7 . 8/28/2012
Nice to see a new chapter!

I noticed some typoes. Don't know if this is the place to post them, but here goes:

1) but secrets made her head and secrets were like oil and water

2) "That's all you have to go on is a story, Rainbow.

3) ground againNaruto avoided

Looking forward to the next chapter. The interaction of Naruto and Rarity are on of my favorites, I still haven't figured out what she thinks of him.
Starving Fox chapter 7 . 8/28/2012
great stuff, I've been waiting for the next chapter and I must say that it didn't let me down.
MyinnerDEMON17 chapter 7 . 8/28/2012
great chapter
Voidangel Soren chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
Nice to see you doing a pony story. Pretty well done, and I see your grammar has improved greatly since I last wandered into one of your stories. No mistakes whatsoever.

A good introduction, despite the slight...how to put this...slowness of the plot. For more inexperienced readers, this might be a little off-putting, but it's a welcome sight for seasoned readers, like myself, who have to endure the mainstream "Naruto gets killed and somehow winds up in Equestria" fics. Thanks for the mystery from the beginning, I'll keep going.

Soren
VenRaider chapter 7 . 8/28/2012
A much pleasurable reading.
frytrix chapter 7 . 8/28/2012
Simply love the chapter, i dont know how you do it, but this story simple draws me in and makes me want to reread the story/chapters several times. I simply cant get enough of it.
heh, keep writing, i cant wait to read more.
Ramen junky chapter 7 . 8/28/2012
yosh! tad violent but thats what shakes things up!good job
Rubicon373 chapter 7 . 8/28/2012
awesome chapter

i look forward to the next update
Grey mage chapter 7 . 8/28/2012
God I love this story. Have you posted this to fimfiction yet? If not, please do. Those kind folks that love pony need to know this exists.
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