| Reviews for You Only Live Twice |
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  Guest chapter 6 . 8/6/2012 Oh God the ending was amaing. My ribs still hurt |
 Vandenbz chapter 6 . 8/6/2012 Naruto certainly had an interesting time in Canterlot for his initial inspection. Loved how he got along with Brassheart and Shining Armor, though I'm hoping that Fellwing gets taken down a peg later and Shining Armor becomes a little less naive about Fellwing's duplicity towards Naruto. The spar was certainly well done, and it was rather funny to see Celestia worry like that. Spotting a few minor spelling errors/typos, here's a few suggestions to fix them if you want. thtat - that little to hard - little too hard comapny - company listend - listened the photographin that paper. - the photograph in this paper. Keep up the great work! |
| Mary Sue Lover chapter 6 . 8/5/2012 I have to say, you are doing a fantastic job with this story. I usually avoid human-turned-into-a-pony stories, but I'm really glad i gave this one a shot. The technical writing quality is great and varied, and the story set-up is even better. Lol, though I am a bit irritated to see you do a lot of the things I was planning to do (but almost certainly better than I will) in my first story, in yours. Ah well; such is life. The only other thing I wanted to mention (an actual criticism this time) has already been said in "Zyber Elthone"'s review, so... yeah. I really hope that you continue with this story. It is much too good to let it be the simple experiment you seemed to make the idea out to be at the beginning of the first chapter. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to future chapters! :-) |
| KnightX chapter 6 . 8/5/2012 Continuing to enjoy this :) |
| battleking chapter 6 . 8/5/2012 This is great stuff! |
| Wonderbee31 chapter 6 . 8/5/2012 Another fine section, and really enjoyed seeing how things went with Naruto there, including he and his nemesis seeming to have buried the ax just a bit anyway. |
| Kamakasie chapter 6 . 8/5/2012 Nnope... |
| BlazaWolf chapter 6 . 8/4/2012 That was a fun chapter to read. |
| Saulong chapter 6 . 8/4/2012 Lol this is one the best crossovers ive read! When or is he going to find out WHO he is? |
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/3/2012 busted a gut yo! great work like always. |
| tatewaki2000 chapter 6 . 8/3/2012 Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!1 |
| tatewaki2000 chapter 5 . 8/3/2012 *wriggles in happiness* |
| tatewaki2000 chapter 4 . 8/3/2012 So cool. :3 *squee* |
| tatewaki2000 chapter 2 . 8/3/2012 You're so awesome! /) |
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/3/2012 "Spike, i'm going to open my eyes.." that was absolutely brilliant! |