I loved this chapter... I hope to see more, your faithfull reader XD

Okay, my biggest beef with this chapter is the fact that Naruto comments on helping Celestia with Twilight from when they were younger, but in chapter 1, it is stated that Twilight becomes Celestia's student AFTER Naruto is discharged from the Guard and is leaving Canterlot.

That plot hole aside, (and I can ignore said plot hole if you have Naruto tease Twilight about her younger days to her great mortification, if only in private since he's been raised better than to embarrass a mare in public) this was a really good chapter, and I especially liked Naruto's spar with Shining Armor, including the fact that he got under the Captain of the Celestial Guard's skin.

Will we be seeing more badass Naruto soon?

I'm surprisingly enjoying this story even though I have no knowledge about the Pony world. You do a good job about giving a newbie to the world proper back story so that I'm not lost trying to follow it. Hope to read more soon.

*falls over laughing* celestials! I love this story!

Hilarious man, just hilarious.

Thank you for another great chapter and your time. i always love how detailed your story is.

Sincerely,

Your Eternal Fan

7Winds ;)

the ending was perfect, my cheeks hurt from grinning so hard.

Very nice chapter!

Found this typo: "What had happened was the he walked through the world"

Looking forward to the next chapter :)

as someone once said...

'HURRY AND FUCKING TYPE YOU MISERABLE CRETIN! I LOVE YOU AND WANT TO READ MORE OF YOUR BEAUTIFUL WORDS!'

update soon please, i want MOAR!

oh jesus christ i love this fic. way to good way too funny.

Hahahaha, yes. This was an awesome chapter. Funny at times, and serious when it needed to be.

Damn, it's good to read your stuff again.

Yeah, this fic is still awesome.

Simply love the chapter, cant wait to read more.

great stuff. Totally worth the wait. Thing is I can hardly stand to wait for more. This is definitely one of my favorite fics so keep it coming.

Hillarious. I LOVE it. This has to be one of, if not THE best MLP crossover fic out there. There are a few good Dresden Files/MLP x-overs, a decent Harry Potter one...but this one leaves them in the dust. It is humorous, just a bit gritty over an otherwise very recogniseable lighthearted world, emotional and fantastically realistic. Or is that realistically fantastic.

I do hope you keep writing more for I really want to read more. And soon...now you have me all curious about the Griffin Crisis and Naruto's part in it. And Naruto will gain more fame in Ponyville. He really is one of the seven most famous ponies there right now...possibly the most famous one. After all, he was there with the Elements of Harmony, but he's done a lot more before that which is now brought to light...

Great chapter i have to admit i want to know why he's know as the Hero of the Griffon Crisis as well. Feel sorry for Shining Armor when he realizes Brassheart is right about Fellwing. Speaking of Fellwing something need to be done about him and his guard before something serious happens. Really want Fellwing to get what he deserves. I'm still wondering who your going to pair Naruto with or if your going pair with more than one girl.