Reviews for You Only Live Twice
Guest chapter 4 . 7/11/2012
Thank you for another heart warming episode. This story has just the right amount of dialog and discription that you are entertained without loss of intrest. Naruto and his conversation with Fluttershy was great. Some how I can see her gaining a crush on Nauto. It would be intristing to see her trying to gain his afection as well as Luna. We eill have to wait and see. Keep up the good work. I only wish I could write stories as well as you. Hope to see a new chapter soon. Coolcat38
KitsuneNoYomeiri chapter 4 . 7/11/2012
I think there's a problem with the new chapter. It stops at ' "Just wait til ya meet these last two. A speed demon and a prissy pants. Oh, you're gonna have fun." ' and the rest of it is missing.

OH MY GOSH AMAZING. loving the characterization. makes me jelly I don't have mine down yet -.-
nightmaster000 chapter 4 . 7/11/2012
Great chapter wonder what the jerk that discharged Naruto think's of everything's that's happen. Hope he get's his due. Will you be pairing Naruto with one of the girl's or more?
Starving Fox chapter 4 . 7/10/2012
Great stuff as usual and I can't wait for another update. I don't know if you have an idea for Naruto's cutie mark yet or even plan to give him one soon but I keep picturing him with a shield of some kind, possibly cracked or broken, to represent his willingness to protect others despite the risk to himself. Just an idea I've been having.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/10/2012
Interesting story. I hope Naruto gets a cutie mark eventually. Keep up the good work!
TwiceMarked chapter 4 . 7/10/2012
Loved it. Really looking forward to the next chapter.
KYUUBI OF DEATH chapter 4 . 7/10/2012
Cant wait for next chapter finally getting away from some of the somber stuff and meeting R.D will be funny
frytrix chapter 4 . 7/10/2012
I simply enjoy reading it all, i think i actually have read the chapters several times ower and ower again...
It has been a long time since i enjoyed reading a fanfiction story like this again.
i simply cant help but be wanting to read more.

I simply cant wait til next chapter is out to find out what happens next.

You should hook him up with Fluttershy, heh. They seem to be a match made in heaven,, or something like that.

looking forward to be reading more.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/10/2012
Pinkie giggled more and struck a karate pose.

"I'm a ninja. Fear my ninja-osity."

lol. even when he isn't in a ninja world, he still meets ninjas...what are the odds?
Guest chapter 4 . 7/10/2012
THere is a reason this story gets so many reviews even in such a short time. It's well thoguht out, has the charm of MLP-FiM yet with a little more grit and "realism". Pudgey, this may just be one of your best works. Certainly without a doubt the best Naruto/MLP crossover out. But then, I doubt there is much competition out yet. Possibly people reading this story might feel inspired. It happens. A really great new concept can inspire many similar ones.
Cheeser42 chapter 4 . 7/10/2012
YAY update!
Good chapter as always and update soon
Guest chapter 4 . 7/10/2012
great chapter! keep it up!
Slicerness chapter 4 . 7/10/2012
a strong and brave friend indeed, wonder how different the events of Dragonshy will be if she insists on bringing Naruto?
Kazuki Shikimori chapter 4 . 7/10/2012
With how close Naruto is to the Apple Family now, I can only imagine his anger and annoyance with the Flim Flam Brothers, lol.
Fanfic Reader chapter 4 . 7/10/2012
A nice bit of I guess of filler but entirely enjoyable. A nice bit of pace and interesting bit with Fluttershy, which kind of took me off guard (thought it be Twilight would be the first to talk to him) but it was nice scene, very nice. Pinkie once again knows too much or she breaks the fourth wall (scary thought she is read the story as it comes out or saw Naruto in his Ninja life *shudders at implication*) and was entertaining in her... Pinkieness... Please continue on with this story as it ranks with the top MLP/Naruto crossover Friendship is Where am I ( I think that's the title). Keep up the great work.

P.S. I think Naruto will be at the Gala no matter what due to ether Celestia or Luna.
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