Reviews for You Only Live Twice
Arashi Uzukaze chapter 7 . 12/2/2013
Dispite it being a Ponyfied Naruto, I'm pleased at how you made it work. You made it exactly how it's supposed to be, Naruto's Chakra or Mana/Magic (whichever it is) making it so only his Physical Attributes are increased such as Healing, Speed, Strength, Stamina, Dexterity and such. Other ones arn't thorough like that and make it so Naruto somehow is able to use Jutsu despite that being impossible without being Unicorn or Alicorn.
Though I'm sure Naruto would be able to eventually walk on water and stuff too with training. Right now he's just like Rock Lee, Unable to use Jutsu, but is able to increase his Physical Abilities, but dispite that, Lee can still Water Walk and Tree Walk.

I look forward to this being continued eventually. I would love to see a race between Naruto and Rainbow, once Naruto is able to fully use his energy as he'll be able to increase his speed with it. And with training, he can make it to were he could use Shunpo and Shunshin (which in my opinion are extremly simlar).

Shunpo:
Shunpo (Flash Steps) is a movement technique, which allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. The focal point which determines the basis of this technique is speed. As speed is the main point of the technique, the method is best characterized by how fast one can get from point A to point B in the least amount of steps. Training and skill are what determines how fast a user of Shunpo can move; those of little skill in the technique or those who have not used it for an extended amount of time would obviously be out of practice, causing those individuals to be considerably slower, which requires the use of more steps to move the same distance and become winded in a shorter amount of time.

Shunshin:
The Body Flicker Technique is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and the intended destination.
Arashi Uzukaze chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
A Ponified Naruto...again. Can't the MLP/Naruto Crossover fics ever keep him Human? I've seen 1 or 2 fics where he remains human, but it's they are so amaturish and bad that I can't read them.
WarriorAngelN7 chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
I sadly declare this story dead
It has been more than a year since the last update
WarriorAngelN7 chapter 7 . 10/19/2013
need ... new...chapter...Please.
kit no kaze chapter 7 . 10/7/2013
please update soon good size of chapters good story 9 outa 10! only thing missing is romance and showing of his past! he is supposed to be happy in his 1st life he couldnt get a girl to like him to save his life and the one that did he never knoticed...now he has the option of 7 mares and none show a intrest in him or him to them this comes off as rated k p.p
Lunarmon chapter 2 . 9/17/2013
I really like it so far, it's really good but I wonder if he'll be able to use his ninjutsu in this story and if he still have the ninetailed fox sealed inside him...probably not but it could be fun.
BlackCatsOfNight chapter 6 . 9/11/2013
just so you know... It's physically impossible for ponies/horses to vomit/be sick
pof chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
yaaaaay
holtjustin04 chapter 7 . 8/27/2013
Rainbow will not be as forgiving to naruto as the others
Silent Discord chapter 7 . 7/21/2013
Hey pudgy! I was looking through my bookmarked stories and I stumbled across this one again and I gotta say: huge fan of your work. I hate stumbling across a good story before its finished because they inevitably end up on indefinite hiatus. I don't know if you have any plans of coming back to this story but it'd be AWESOME if you did! I was looking at the update date and it made me laugh; your last update was on my birthday. Any chance if you read this you could let me know any plans for this story (whether or not it'll continue)? You've got my all time fav story with broken hearts shattered dreams so I know it's possible! Thanks a ton for what you have already written
Soul chapter 7 . 7/5/2013
I've come to like that Naruto is actually calm and collected in this fic. The fact he can one-up Mac is a plus, though I was wondering when are you going to update this? This is a great fic that shouldn't rot with the other "In-Progress, but will never be finished" stories.

- Soul Hidden In The Mist
froger495 chapter 7 . 7/2/2013
cant wait for the next chapter.
the grey mage chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
a little unrealistic on how he got kicked out. i mean, celestia sent out twilight on a mission of friendship. making him a ronin is kinda harsh.
Wing Zero Alchemist chapter 6 . 6/6/2013
It's been WAY too long since you updated. Is the story dead? Have you quit fanfiction again? Give us a sign man! Please! This is one of the few good Naruto/MLP crossovers out there and I just gotta know what happens!

You don't really owe any of us anything story wise, but a note mentioning a hiatus or something would be appreciated.
TheRyuuMaster chapter 7 . 5/30/2013
It's beenquite a while. Are you still updating?
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