Reviews for You Only Live Twice |
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Ferdiad chapter 7 . 11/13/2012 Better than expected. |
Necromancer Gora chapter 7 . 11/12/2012 I just finished reading and I must say, you haven't lost a bit of your edge despite being out of the picture for several years. I am eagerly awaiting what comes next. |
Nebula1701 chapter 7 . 11/12/2012 Wonderful story! I really like how you integrated Naruto into the MLP world. However, I am afraid something needs to be done with Naruto... his personality/backstory here just irks me sooo much. He is just walking a thin line to Mary-Sueness. He just seems a little too perfect even with his faults here. Perhaps if he were thrown into more situations where the Mane 6 were the only ones to rescue him... instead of him running into trouble all the time. I can pick out here you are trying to show Naruto that he doesn't always have to sacrifice himself for others... but I don't think that has been brought to the forefront yet. Well I'll enjoy reading this story further. Please update soon. I can't wait to continue this. |
Necromancer Gora chapter 1 . 11/12/2012 You probably don't remember me but I certainly remember you. You have been on my favorite author's list for nearly as long as a I have been a member of , and I have just recently gotten into the whole MLP: FIM thing and so I can only say one thing I am sorry that I haven't read this earlier. I enjoyed the first chapter immensely and I can't wait to read the rest. Oh and welcome back! |
David Brown chapter 7 . 11/12/2012 I'm dreaming of Naruto at the Cider Contest vs. the Flim Flam Brothers. "Kage no bushin!" |
BoB teh Snail chapter 1 . 11/10/2012 Season 3 today :3 |
Cloudmage23 chapter 7 . 11/8/2012 normally i hate my little pony, but i was bored enough to come here and at least read this story and i have to say, this is a pretty good story! i will NEVER watch the show but i can say that this story definitly holds my interest! |
Wing Zero Alchemist chapter 7 . 11/8/2012 Please update soon! I miss your story magic! |
Luigi's Wacky World chapter 7 . 10/26/2012 Yeah, this is definitely a fave! I'd love to see more in the near future. |
PheonixFarwind chapter 7 . 10/23/2012 I enjoyed this fic. I hope you will hopefully i attempt to get back to the melt. hope to see another chapter soon. |
CursedEyeLore chapter 7 . 10/21/2012 I'm really enjoying the story. I wasn't a fan of the series before but you got me watching it with your story. I hope you see this one to completion and thanks for your more then great job in integrating both stories together. |
You will fear my laser face chapter 7 . 10/21/2012 dude... brohoof! |
You will fear my laser face chapter 6 . 10/21/2012 the venture brothers! |
You will fear my laser face chapter 1 . 10/19/2012 W-What is this a naruto/mlp that isn't like skinning myself alive and taking a bath in the dead sea? |
Shindaiyo chapter 1 . 10/16/2012 Only you could pull of a crossover like this and make it worthwhile to read... I don't like MLP personally. But you've yet again made it believable. Don't give up pudge! You have a real gift for writing. |