I LOVE IT SO MUCH! Tony is really in character and that's really important to me. We see both that witty, armored side of him, the vulnerable side, and the dark side. If you've ever read ACOTAR (which you should), he reminds me a lot of Nesta, and I love that. :) And I'm so so glad you didn't make it a TonyxSteve fic because I hate that. I'll be sure to read your other work too. :) Keep writing!

will only be a few chapters... fifteen chapters later...
This story is amazing

That was an awesome story. Well Done!

Amazing story! Thank you for writing this!

Wait. How would that work? Wasn't Bruce downstairs in the lab? How could he have been talking to Steve (if it even was Steve) if he wasn't even there?

THIS WAS SO *CUTE* THANK YOU! :D

Though I am not crazy about it, I can understand the helplessness because you specifically made this Tonywhump. But the medical inaccuracies are just...well bad.

1) They took out the arc reactor- which means Tony would be dead within five minutes. I am not sure you had a full understanding of how it worked when you wrote this.

2) Water touching wires doesn't just cause sparks, it causes electrocution. So again, Tony would be dead or at least seriously injured to the point of near fatality.

3) Tony's breathing because of the arc reactor is already bad (30% reduced lung capacity due to the huge metal thing in his chest taking up space). Waterboarding/drowning him along with the brutal beating would pretty much cause some sort of problems. More than just passing out.

Very nice job. I liked the maturity of Tony's apology. If only we could all be so self aware! Thank you for sharing it with me.

Thank you for all the time you spent writing or thinking of this story. You are amazing.

Great fic!

Oh. My. God. That was fucking amazing! That epilogue was perfect, and that last line- I can't even! I'm so glad I decided to google some avenger fics today, because that story was so good! You're an amazing writer (and like, DEEP, and such), please keep it up3

Poor Tony... God, he's so miserable...

Damn, I'm torn between being absorbed in the intensity of this scene (there's something more personal, intimate about strangling someone, instead of shooting or even stabbing them), especially as he bleeds out at the end- and cracking up at the hilarious lines scattered throughout!

"Oh right,' he realised, almost sadly, 'the killing thing. Not generally accepted and all that.'"
I can't

I have plenty to say, but I'll just stick to one question- How the hell did Q manage to tie up the three most powerful men in the building?! He has GOT to have some super power or something, the maniac:P

THAT MOTHERFVCKING *BLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP*