|Reviews for 730 Days of Convergence|
| The visiter chapter 10 . 5/24
Hey man long time no see it great to have you back great chapter it looks things are starting to get more mysteries just like Timmy in Dead Space Journey into darkness that reminds when you're done with this story can you work on Dead Space Journey into Darkness please I want to read the rest
| Light Seeker 001 chapter 10 . 4/25
Never thought you'd stick with this story.
| ROCuevas chapter 10 . 4/24
| LikeCrimsonBloodshed chapter 7 . 10/24/2014
Holy crud. Another twist! I'm excited to find out who left the message! Very good way of building tension!
| LikeCrimsonBloodshed chapter 5 . 7/7/2014
Holy crap. I was legitimately feeling the fear and the panic as they nearly drowned her. That is brutal and sick! I'm not the most learned expert in Dead Space lore. I've played the games and read "Martyr," so I don't know if Unitologists actually do this, but if they don't, kudos to you for making a creepily fitting ritual for them! Can't wait to see what lies in store!
| LikeCrimsonBloodshed chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
I must confess, I had been toying with an idea for a story similar to this in my head. But this story is very well-done already! I very much enjoy how it's structured introducing this time in the canon and this new character.
You've set it up brilliantly. I can't wait to read more! Cheers!
| ersay123 chapter 9 . 3/7/2013
Just read all these chapters in one go and was easily hooked by the first chapter :D Love this story so much! Can't wait for this to be updated. I feel like your speculations and theories on unitology will become head!cannon for me XD
| Sakura123 chapter 9 . 1/9/2013
I'm really enjoying this. I almost didn't read it because it centralized on Untiology, but this is incredibly entertaining, right down to the characters and their circumstances. Can't wait until you update more.
| Techne chapter 6 . 11/19/2012
So they have brought the USG Ishimura into the docking bay? I wonder how this is going to work out for them in the end, I'm sure its not going to be a pretty one. And why do I get the feeling that there are going to be leftovers of the necromorphs there? And if so, what will the unitologists think of all this?
As for Riley, I am assuming that Peter was either on the O'Bannon or the Ishimura, most likely the Ishimura. Is there any possibility of a flashback so that we can get a look at the type of person that he was? Just curious is all.
| Techne chapter 5 . 11/17/2012
Yeah, those fuckers would've never been able to get their grubby hands on me long enough to hold me under the water. Can you imagine a mass murder of church people? Yeah, you would've seen that because of this. I can't believe they did that to her! She is playing it coy though, trying to keep to the plan, so I think she's still doing good. Loved her reaction to it though.
Who is Peter? Guess we'll find out eventually.
| Techne chapter 4 . 11/17/2012
So, my first thought about Sutton is that she is a complete bitch. I can't believe she is practically throwing away everything in her life for the church, which is stupid as hell. However, I do think this stems from spending to much time with the church. They are definitely doing something behind closed doors and I'm eager to see what it is. Especially with how she reacted to Marcus, as well as Riley and Madison when they were trying to find out from her who gave her that large scar on her side.
| Techne chapter 3 . 11/16/2012
I'm curious as to what Riley's defensive demeanor is over the mentioning of a sibling. Not that I didn't expect her that to happen after it being revealed, it was just shocking to see her act that way. She just opened up a weakness in her armor that I should have known they would capitalize on.
As for Lara, that's another shocking development in the story. She was so ugly towards Riley, yet wanted to help her out with not getting tied up in the church. I'm amazed to see where you go with this girl.
| Techne chapter 2 . 11/4/2012
So, Riley is joining the Church of Unitology under an alias, eh?
Why do I get this feeling that she isn't going to like what she finds. That there are some things just not worth knowing because it could have dire consequences to the actions that you take. Oh, well. I still think what shes doing is good. Someone needs to get in there, find out whats going on and put those bible thumper's in their places.
My one concern is Sutton. What the FUCK happened to her?! If she was such a die hard Unitology hater, then what changed her mind? Did they pull a Tearjerker (you'd have to watch American Dad to know what I'm saying) on the people aboard the Sprawl or something? That's just not right.
And beings that I doubt I'll get to do this in two days because of it being the day we all head out to vote.
Happy birthday dear!
| Wisewun1 chapter 9 . 11/4/2012
I love how you brought Stross into the story and left us with some questions about Alexa, and Riley's reaction to this strange event.
Things to Improve:
The dialogue slipped a little in this chapter. Some of it just seemed a little unnatural. Like in the doctor's office. It's not that it was really really bad, it just seemed resistant to flow.
My Favorite Part:
Probably the Stross part. I liked it all. The description, the action, everything.
Another interesting chapter and a very good way to ensure Riley will be returning to the church. I can't wait for updates!
| Wisewun1 chapter 8 . 11/2/2012
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! All this drama! Also, I love that Lara is helping! I think maybe Riley and Lara should be a ship. Maybe? Anyways. I loved the idea of the group circle and Daina being a rude-ass bitch about that poor girl's dead boyfriend.
Things to Improve:
A couple lines in the flashback were a little over-explanatory (you probably hate me using that word so often) but it was honestly no big deal. It was so gripping, I barely noticed.
My Favorite Part:
Probably the flashback. We finally get to see why she's had all of these problems. (Is Peter a character in the games? I can't remember...)
GIVE ME MORE CHAPTERS!