|Reviews for Testament: A Half Life 2 prequel Part 1|
| rednightmare chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
I have to commend you on this. The dialogue is perfect! And your choice of subject matter is a very interesting one - a piece of the story we never got to see, but one that seems vital to plot progression. You mastered Isaac's quirky irritation and Barney's grimness, coated with some tongue-in-cheek jokes. I found your detail about Kleiner's eyesight particularly excellent... as a contact-user myself, it really lowered my spirits to think of him struggling through mundane inconveniences like this, seemingly small but such a major hit to his quality of life. You really manage to convey the inherent goodness of both of these characters without resorting to cliches or action movie heroics.