|Reviews for Battle Cross|
| Queen Jellybean chapter 15 . 3/15
Just an observation, you called Ash Astrid around the part when Archibald came home
| huntergo123 chapter 20 . 2/16
Why does everyone seem to be an asshole in this story? Is it because, like you said, they're all based on yourself?
| huntergo123 chapter 8 . 2/16
Why the FUCK wouldn't Hiccup recognize his OWN motorcycle? WTF.
| FuyukoYoshidaKat chapter 25 . 7/16/2014
I just gonna say...
WHAT A MIRACLE
I'M COMPLETELY OVERJOYFUL BY THIS CHAPTER, YOU ARE SO GREAT, I LOVED IT OMG IT CAN'T END LIKE THIS, WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT? POOR HECTOR, STOP MAKING HIM SUFFER
A BANKRUPT? HIS MOTHER IS ACTUALLY A TRAITOR? ASH BETRAYED HIM AND TOOK CONTROL OVER HRT? HE DISSAPEARS IN ENEMY TERRITORY? DO YOU KNOW WHAT YOU HAD JUST DONE WITH MY SANITY?
You know, at some point i expected like a bugging romance and an understanding, even a happy family like the one we didn't got in HTTYD2 but THE FUCK IS WITH YOU AND PLOT TWISTS? I DIDN'T EXPECTED THAT, AT ALL.
AND IT'S JUST A CHAPTER AWAY OF BEING COMPLETE AND A PREQUEL IN CONSTRUCTION, BUT AL OF THIS JUST GO ME DUMB AND HURT AND EXICTED AND ADHFJKALFHJDKKDD FUCK YOU AND YOUR AWESOMENESS.
UPDATE SOON, FOR THE SHAKE OF MY WELL BEING
And you owe an Ashctor moment for all the frustration, feelings and hurt you just put in my life with this wondeful fic. Please! Make it an AU. I don't care. I need a consolation hug ;A;
GOOD LUCK WITH EVERYTHING
| Bassilth Phoenix chapter 6 . 5/7/2014
Sorry RAGE he completed the transition to 'M'. Too slow I guess
| FreeCrest chapter 22 . 3/28/2014
Is Mr. Sir from "Holes", perhaps?
| Queenie Greengrass chapter 24 . 12/16/2013
I'm so glad you updated :) ALTHOUGH WHY THE HELL DID YOU END ON A CLIFF HANGER?!
| Sayuri Takehama chapter 3 . 11/23/2013
Ok first, maybe I should finish reading the story and THEN review... We had tje same idea! Hehe... Well, how can somebody be called father who is ready to harm his own son?! I know he wanted to teach him a lesson, but seriously!?
Im going to finish reading now...
| Sayuri Takehama chapter 2 . 11/23/2013
Hey! Ok this story is really cool and I am just at cahpter two! Okay, tje teal reason why Im forcing you to read this crap ;) is cause I got an idea for who the night fury coupd be. As mentioned he never took off his helmet. My idea was it could be hiccup. Maybe he just barely surrived the collapse of the cave and his father forbid him to race again. But at last it will come out! Maybe you like my idea or not. Pet me know it
| lilo202 chapter 24 . 10/20/2013
Nice chapter. I especially liked the scene with Solomon and Valarie. I feel so sorry for Val, returned only to find a broken family.
I feel like the writing in this chapter was a bit worse than the previous chapters. I can't exacly put my finger on it but if I need to I would say that the flow was lacking somewhat, perhaps because it took you a long time to write it and you lost the flow in your head (if that makes sense?).
| Hiccup2012 chapter 24 . 10/14/2013
1) Ashley and Ronnie
2) "uncle" ; took him in while his dad was on trial
4) AI crossover of Jarvis from Iron Man and Alfred from Batman
5) Line-X Tundra Truck
7) 420 different variations I think
9) language, innuendo, crude jokes, mature content, maybe the story about how Hector's parents split up.
10) haddock, Hofferson, Thorston, Thompson, Johnson, Maverick, Bateman
| FuyukoYoshidaKat chapter 24 . 10/14/2013
Hola! (I think you speak spanish as you could answer a few comments in previous chapters. If not, I hope you will understand this comment somehow :S )
Debo admitir que este FanFic es asombroso, enserio que me encanta :3 Hector es todo un descarado xD ya han pasado como 5 capitulos y aun no supero la risa en su intento de quitarle el sosten a Ash xDD
Y como describen la acción! Ojala sigan haciendo un gran trabajo como hasta ahora :) Enfin, quisiera participar en su quiz: ( I hope it'll be easier if I answer in english?)
1) Ashley Hofferson and Veronica Thompson.
2)Archibald is one of Solomon's old friends who became Hector's God-Father after Solomon was in jail for being accused of intent of rape. Hector calls him 'Uncle' because he thinks it's easier to say that instead of 'God-father'.
3) Umm.. Ansgard? I don't remember .-.
4)Ouch, that's difficult. 2. 40? Or not, I don't know T_T Just know he is Hector's virtual british butler, replacement of 'Annoying' Young Hector xP
5) An X-Tundra, or something like that (".)
7) It stands for speed and defense and offensive weapons. (Ok, I should re-read the whole fanfic again after this...)
9) Because of language and suggestive themes, and you were worried that if you left it in 'T' rate, and admin would erase it.
10) (Here, I died x_x)
-Hofferson (Ash, Archibald,Diana)
-Thompson (Ronnie, her mother)
-Haddock (Hector, Solomon, Valerie)
-Maverick (Alvin, Drake)
-Bateman (Cameron, Rebecca)
-Fungerssen [(this is wrong xD) Mildew]
-Igerman (Frankie, the Haddock's chef)
And don't know more...( How could I forget Gordon's?! DD': )
So, hope I didn't failed that bad xD Good luck and please, update soon!
| StorSpeaker chapter 24 . 10/14/2013
YOU HAVE RETURNED FROM YOUR TRIALS OF HARDSHIP, HORRAY!
*Cheers, fireworks, clapping band other party items are heard*
It's great you have came back man. This is great, now to answer ur questions
1. Ash and Ronnie's names are Ashley and Rebecca
2. Hectors relation with Archibald is that either he is his uncle or father in law
3. Hectors grandad is Old Wrinkly
4. Jefferson is an AI program.
5. Ronnie drives the Zippleback 420/520
6. Alvin's hair is black
7. I have no idea
8. Not a clue
9. Wasn't it because of that stripper scene or when Solomon was drugged and accused of sexual assault?
10. I can't do it,
I know it's not all the questions but I didn't want to cheat.
Wait a minute...that is the LAST F$& %#£ CHAPTER OF THIS?! WHAT IS GOING TO MAN, UPDATE SOON!
And RAGE... Nice to hear from u to
| THE NIGHTS RAGE chapter 24 . 10/14/2013
dude can we talk please
| EquinoxKnight01 chapter 23 . 10/14/2013
Yo, Equinox! Stop going AWOL and update this story! It's been months, man! Get off your PS3 Diablo wizard and write some stories! FF and your fans aren't paying you boatloads of money to sit around until 2014!
Shake a leg, bro!