|Reviews for Giroro Presents: Dating the Enemy!|
| malie chapter 37 . 12/13/2014
PLEASE MORE! THIS IS MY FAV. FANFIC EVER! :3 YOUR SUCH A GOOD WRITER!
MOOOOORRRE! plz XD
| Ziasafeli chapter 37 . 11/30/2014
I love this fanfic! Please make more!
| FreyaIwa chapter 37 . 11/29/2014
Oh, man I was hoping that since I just started reading this a few days ago it would be finished..
Especially since it's on 37 ;;;;
You are going to finish this right? Please please finish this I'm so addicted to it!
| The One and Only Birdie chapter 10 . 7/23/2014
I loved the brother sister banter with Natsumi and Fuyuki :) Not to mention Dororo's sleepover! Oh man, that killed me! :D
I keep reading, you keep writing. Deal? Deal.
| The One and Only Birdie chapter 6 . 7/21/2014
HAHA I loved your Fourth Wall comment :) You're very good at playing up the comedy, and I you seem to have a really good grasp of the characters! Love it! :D
| The One and Only Birdie chapter 5 . 7/21/2014
Oh man - I love this! This is all kinds of fabulous. You have the same satirical wimsy the show has and I love it!
I look forward to the next 32 chapters! :D
| RunwithscissorsXXXbattlescars chapter 37 . 7/11/2014
AKJLSHFKJFH! I FORGOT!
Oh well, I am here now!
And for some reason I had thought that I did not read chapter 36!
I typed up a whole entire review and then... I just... I totally didn't realize that I had already read that chapter.
Great to see that you're updating this again; if not present-tense, then it's nice to see that that commercial break finally ended for a day, at least.
*Momentary review break; it's little sis' birthday and I have to leave for a sec to play a board game with her.* Not like that will matter in the end.
All right, I'm back.
"That's not a good symbol, you baboon!"
Phfft... I'm laughing right now. At least they tried.
My gosh. All the stuff that you mentioned where the guy gets the girl. XD Never happens. That's great.
*Sorry, have to take a break again*
"Koyuki and Natsumi are different girls, you know."
That completely caught Dororo off guard. "What?"
I know, right? Took Giroro forever to find out, too.
Okay so so far this has been a really confusing review because I write stuff as I go, but I'm done reading now so I can piece it all together.
My first thought as I finish: Wow. Garuru is great in this. Then again, he's one of your favorite characters, so it's natural that you would be able to write him so well. ;)
Giroro's lucky to have him as a brother.
But... you have me on the edge of my seat here. And I'm sitting on the floor!
Will Giroro turn back? Hmmm...
Will Natsumi stop being dense and just confront Giroro already? Hmmm...
Will Dororo tell Koyuki his feelings? Hmmm...
Will the narrator or the author win in their little background battle? Hmmm...
When will this animation company run out of ads to show? (The biggest question, I think.)
For the first half of the chapter, it felt almost like all the italics were erased, because in some places, characters were thinking and their thoughts were not italicized. This is fine to do, but only if you are consistent with it, which you haven't done this chapter - so I'm guessing that it's the formatting's fault. (Yes, it does do that sometimes.)
Also, I noticed your perpetuating habit of using "the adjective _" in place of characters' names; for example: "the pink-haired girl," "the blonde-haired man" (side note: blond is for boys and blonde is for girls, just like fiance is a male who you're engaged to and a fiancee is a female) "the Keronian-Pekoponian," "the Corporal." After a while, it gets a little tiring to see, especially since your readers already know the names of these characters and who the characters are, so it's unnecessary to remind them so often. And if you do want to remind them, then there are other ways to do so. You know what I mean. I trust you.
Anyway, another great chapter as always, and sorry for the super-late review :P
Keep up the good work! This story is getting tenser and tenser with each chapter! (I sure hope that "tenser" is a word!)
| TamamaNitoheiDesu chapter 37 . 7/8/2014
Yaay, another update! I enjoyed it, although I have forgotten some of the previous elements in the story... Keep up the good work!
| Mysty chapter 37 . 7/7/2014
...am I dreaming?
...oh my word it updated.
I literally did a happy dance around my house when I saw this! Great to see it's back!
| Himaru chapter 37 . 7/7/2014
Haha! Overwhelming joy filled moment an update!
Loved the tidbits of humor mixed in, to diffuse the tense moments with lighthearted banana jokes and damage to the fourth wall. Reading the parts about Garuru always helps me get a better understanding of his character. Thank you for the chapter!
| SouthernKittyGal chapter 37 . 7/5/2014
I was so psyched to see another chapter!
I'm aware you like critique on your writing but I'm sure there are ways you could get better, I don't see them. (Besides, how can I critique someone else's writing when my own isn't perfect either?)
Only thing I noticed was when the narrator was listing off anime(s?) that the boy didn't get the girl in. When he said Sorry, only part of it was bolded, not the whole word.
Otherwise, great chapter. Hope to see another one soon. u
| Kikyoremura chapter 37 . 7/4/2014
Glad to see this story coming back. Love the tension between everyone, especially how Natsumi is still acting like herself rather than accumulating feelings for anyone but 'Rio.' Plus the brother relationship is a really nice touch, not seen that often in most stories :) Can't wait for more
| GiroGirl723 chapter 37 . 7/4/2014
HOORAY FOR FROZEN REFS
| Rainbowkittyblossomwings chapter 37 . 7/4/2014
I noticed the tiny bit of Kurumois in this and I was extremely pleased.
The reference to hatoful boyfriend and corpse party...Didn't know you knew both of those.
| cryshardy chapter 36 . 2/24/2014
Oh my God! I need to know wats going to happen big BIG time. Please update soon! I would love it forever