Reviews for Fairy Tail: The Lost Magic Wanderer
Keiko Braginski chapter 3 . 2/5/2015
Name: Raven Darkness
Age: 16
Hair color: Black with red and blue stripes.
Wizard Type: Celestial
Spirits: Midna the Twil Imp, Lepra the Leopard, Zero the Phoenix, and Bass the Destroyer.
Personality: Tomboy, hothead, kind, protective, loyal.
Clothing: A black shirt with the Chinese symbol for Demon. She wears a black leather jacket over that and a silver wolf necklace. She wears dark blue jeans and red sneakers.
Guild: Angel Feather

I think that is it. I hope she gets in.
Guest chapter 3 . 8/9/2013
Okay can i give 2
for Angels feather and one for FT

Name : Trinny gold

Nickname : Trin - chan by her friends,
Dark Angel by her enemies

Gender : female

Age : 19

Hair style/color : Blond hair which is
tied in a pony tail which reaches till
her bangs covers her
left eye.

Height : 5'5

Weight : 44kgs

Eye color : Dark caramel colored.

Body : Busty and fair not too much
but fair.

Scars : N/A

Tattoos : N/A

Clothing : She wears the same
dress as wendy during Edolas arc.
She wears white sandals with the dress.
And the color of the dress is not blue,
and green its lightblue and pink.

Personality : tomboyish,foulmouthed,
caring,kind,scarry when angry,
messy,funny,strong.

History : She was roaming from place
to place in search of a gulid lastly
she found Angel feather she really
is a traveller in Fiore she was from
a small country side didnt had
any parents she lived with her grandma
. She thinks of Angel
feather as her New came to
Angel feather so she cannot be a
load on her Grand ma.

Magic : Illusion magic,elemental magic
she controls main elements like
sky,water,earth,fire,ice,poision,lightning.

Guild : Angel feather

Guild mark : red,left thigh.

Likes : FOOD,sleeping,beer

Dislikes : Enemies,betrayers,liars,cockiness.

Hobbies : Singing,taking S class missions.

Other : N/A

Here is the second OC :

Name : Minty Gold

Nickname : Mint by everyone

Age : 19

Gender : Female

Hair style/color : Pale blond,shoulder
length hair like Ellie in Rave master.

Eye color : Dark caramel color

Height : 5'5

Weight : 44kgs

Body : Busty,same body color as Cana

Scars : N/A

Tattoos :N/A

Clothing : Same dress as Ellie in rave
master but she wears jeans instead
of skirt.

History : Same as Trinny but she came
to fairy of the sisters were
totally unaware of the sister thing.
They were seperated by eachothere
when they were was
kept by the parents (she is not orphan)
and Trinny was kept by her
to family issues.
They both are totally unaware of
eachother present.( i hope u can
understand well i also hope you will
make them know that they are sisters
in future)She came to fairy tail
to know the world from her side.

Magic : Ice magic,firemagic,unision raid.

Guild : Fairy Tail

Guild mark : red ,right thigh(fateful)

Personality : a bit boyish,careless,
kind,silly,a loyal member,strong,
a bit teasing,pranker.

Likes : sleeping,ice cream,cutlets,
pizzas,pastas.

Dislikes : Raven tail,enemies,cockiness.

Hobbies : Singing,eating.

Other ; N/A

Well trinny is more stronger than
Minty but minty have the same power as
have the power same as
laxus.

Hopes!Well thats it and i hope if u
like my 2 !
Kassadar-Emperor of Mankind chapter 3 . 8/8/2013
Interesting...
RPG1115 chapter 3 . 4/16/2013
So far awesome story. I'm looking foward to the future chapters as well as seeing the new OC's you make. Kai and Vera are both hilarious and I'm interested to see how they both grow in both power and knowledge. Update soon.
Dequincy chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Hi. I left a review on your fanfic "Beyblade Metal Revoloution" on how to write the beyblading scence. I hope i was a big help. Leave an authors note at the end of the next chapter in this story and let me know what you think. GOD bless you and have a blessed day.
KA chapter 3 . 3/22/2013
Great story.
blackraven88 chapter 3 . 3/21/2013
Hey, when's Lion's Pride guild rolling in? I really can't wait for my character to show up :D!
Inhuman X chapter 3 . 3/18/2013
Ooooh that was cool, and Kai with the relic powers! Wonder if he'll end up using the Tomb more, who knows. Could be his last resort secret weapon whenever his Phoenix Magic and his Star Force Magic don't work. Unless he combined them to make Phoenix Star Force Magic XD I'm going loco, I loved this chapter
Inhuman X chapter 2 . 3/18/2013
Can I submit an Oc for Poker Card? I hope the King isn't taken lol
San child of the wolves chapter 3 . 3/18/2013
Great chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Good luck with it.
Starlight AT chapter 3 . 3/18/2013
Awww...I bet Kage would be cute to cuddle with

Marta: You and animals are a menace...

So Kai unlocks the power of the relic, gets a healing treatment from Vera and said mage and Kage are in his debt. not bad. I do like Fairy Tail but i just got into it so I might be a bit lost on what is going on but I understand so far.
An Anon Fellow chapter 3 . 3/18/2013
I'm surprised I haven't paid attention to this considering I actually read Fairy Tail... Slow minded guy right here.

It looks interesting and you have it placed in an interesting time frame, and you're building up to something. So looks good so far.

And the most common question I guess, need more ocs?
Lightningpanda chapter 3 . 3/18/2013
Cool. You finally updated. :P
Pudding21 chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
I have a oc suggestion.
name: Ayameko Kinji
Age: 15
Gender: female
Appearance: Sky blue hair and lime green highlights and tips mid-back length. Sky blue piercing eyes. smiles a lot
Personality: she look like a sweet girl with the twinkling eyes and innocent smile, but she's not. she plays the role of a "double agent" joining dark guilds to get the info on what they are doing. she's is very determined and stubborn. fights until the very end, no matter how injured.
Guild: Lions Pride
Guild symbol location and color: lime green and on her right shoulder.
Clothing: lime green and sky blue dress with gold sandals and a sky blue headband with lime green flower
Magic: earth and sky dragon slayer.
Nickname/Battle name: Sky Priestess
I hope you enjoy
Penguinlord352 chapter 3 . 2/16/2013
This is pretty good, hope to see more of this soon. You've clearly thought out your characters and their abilities, so I'm interested in seeing their interactions and reactions to whatever you've got planned.
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