all of them is broken, even malfoy, but not broken as much the hero and heroine war..
i think this story must have sequel :D

Great one shot Bex, I loved it, I hope I never have to live in a time when you are not writing about dramione anymore because your stories gives me all these emotions which just make my shippers heart so very very happy:)

OMG. That part where Draco was yelling that he has nothing to offer was divine. I love the face that he's pretty much fighting with himself, debating whether or not he should ask her to stay. *Applauds*

Oh, and the smut was great too.

Another great one shot from Bex, which tugs and torment readers shippers heart, as usual it was thoughtful and great, I loved the whole detail "first fuck scene", it was glorious. As always you both Draco and Hermione spot on, I do love the way you write Draco which is perfect. I did have some fear about the ending, but thank god you decided to end on a positive.
I have a mix feeling about effects of the war on everyone, I think that it is something that is not often I think about as in books after the end we have epilogue in which the main characters seems all right, but there must be some sort repercussion of the war, it did made me think, but i must admit I have a bit of a giggle while reding about Harry wetting his bed, I know it's horrible but I can't help my "questionable soul".
My most favourite part was, "That incident, their first kiss, always reminded her of a car crash; people often described how they could recall every moment before and every moment after, but the impact itself was lost or hazy, like when you find a new bruise and can't remember where it came from.
And Hermione could genuinely remember every detail that followed the impact.
Every detail."

I was happy with the ending, and I'm usually sad or unfulfilled with endings. :]]

I loved that entire last scene, down to him slightly squeezing her hand back. It was all so amazingly well written! I loved it all! Jumping into the flash back and then the present to seamlessly... it was just WOW :]]

I am such a huge fan of your work! Thanks for continuing to give us brilliant works of art like this one!

That was sweet.. Always wait for iso.. Thank you

I'm so happy to see another one shot from you. I really do love your writing and I do have a guilty pleasure for a D/Hr secret/forbidden romance. My fav. I loved how they were fighting one sec then getting it on the next with so much anger and passion. Us women dream of our own situation like that. Great work. More like this plz!

I'd have to agree with ATT159's comment about the description of their psychological symptoms, but either way, that part pulled at my heart and was extremely sad to read :(

I liked the way you've written their sex scenes. And I really enjoyed the little part where Draco says, "I knew you'd feel like this". It, I think, puts a lot of meaning into few words.

As another previous commenter had said, I could practically see their arguments coming alive. I could totally hear them fighting each other in my head, one yelling at the other. Freakin' explosive.

I feel your sentiments about the ending though. You said you weren't sure if you were 100% happy with the ending and neither am I haha. It felt a little.. I'm not sure how to describe it. A little off, a little like, there wasn't closure? I don't know I'm rambling.

I liked how you brought back the idea of holding his world though as Hermione had mentioned earlier.

There some parts that definitely got me tearing me. Like when Draco was yelling that he had nothing to offer her.

Oh lord. Anyway. Wonderful one-shot :) You have a way with words.

I love that Draco gives Hermione hope in this one. Its almost always the other way round.. 3

Beautiful, as always. Truly beautiful.

i love this! )

You continue to astound me with your words 3

This is one of my favorite one shot, brillant!

very good :)

How beautiful! I love the incorporation of the punch from POA.

My initial reaction to your prediction of psychological problems of the war hero generation was that it went a tad unrealistic. Now that I think about it, though, at least for Harry it makes a lot of sense. I mean, this is a guy whose parents were murdered in front of him at age one, followed by criminal abuse and neglect by his pseudo family for ten years. Then he heads off to boarding school where he's persecuted by some sort of villain each year. Finally he vanquishes evil, but at the price of the lives of many of his loved ones.

If anything, JKR's depiction of him as a generally well adjusted little boy in Sorcerer's Stone was unrealistic.