|Reviews for With You|
| Puffgirl1952 the 2nd chapter 42 . 11/20
What ever happened to Rei?
Did she redeem herself?
Story was a bit quick but good...
| Ami Mizuno Fan chapter 1 . 11/6
A good prologue to begin this story.
| Anne Boleyn Fan chapter 5 . 10/23
Another great chapter in which Ami had been able to found out about how Kyoya had been aware of her who she was as Sailor Mercury because of the watchers he sent to keep tabs on her reported numerous occasions of supernatural events occurring around her since he had been intrigued by her after he first laid his eyes on her. He believed her to be in the right in her fallout with the rest of the Inner Sailor Senshi after Ami came to defeat Usagi in armed combat over possession of her clan's sacred blade which made Usagi make the others aware of her being unable to accept Ami for who she was, care nothing for her, and despise her out of her embarrassment of being defeated by Ami and her fury at Ami for not giving her the sacred blade like she had wanted her to do so even though she had no real entitlement to it and betrayed Ami by commanding Makoto, Minako, and Rei to kill Ami since she labeled her as a traitor to the White Moon Kingdom, but came to consider it a pity that the other girls could not see it in the same way that he did and did cheer Ami up by sending her a bouquet of white lilies of her depression from her fallout with the others. I came to like how Ami had been confused that he had not been freaked out by talking cats like Artemis and Luna, but what did make him angry and bothered him was why specifically Usagi had been the only one who had the ability to vanquish their enemies. He did make Ami realize that Usagi had not really been a real best friend to her as what 'best friend' who actually accepted her friends for who they were, cared about them, did love them like sisters, and ended up having a genuine respect and a shared mutual trust in them the way that they did with her would ever come to leave the rest of them high and dry with little to no real abilities to protect themselves from an attack and come to force them to rely on her to save their lives from their enemies the way that Usagi had done to Ami, Makoto, Minako, and Rei? It might have ended up making Ami realize that it had been Usagi's way of being in charge as their leader so she could control them and did happen to be the most powerful of all of them not only because she had been arrogant enough to believe it was her right to be, but her fear that if they became stronger than her they would be a real threat to her and that by her getting to be the one to save everyone's lives from their enemies they would be forever bound in service her from eternal gratitude for her being the reason all of them had still been alive.
| Anne Boleyn Fan chapter 4 . 10/23
Another great chapter with Kyoya asking Ami's grandfather for his formal permission to marry Ami and him giving him that promise that he would make her happy and keep her safe as he accepted Ami for who she was, cared about her, did love her, and ended up having a genuine respect and a mutual shared trust in each other the way that she did with him. Basically Ami's mother Saeko had no interest in taking up the arts of swordsmanship so Ami ended up being the 'voluntary' next in line? Cool how Ami does not regret it since her Grandfather had always drilled it into her head that deception had been the way of the shinobi and that deception had allowed her to differentiate between ally and foe with Kyoya guessing that she meant the girls, but she had just merely smiled at him and neither confirmed or disagreed with what he said to her. It did make sense that Ami might have had some sort of training in the art of swordsmanship in the past since Ami had been able to fight pretty well with a sword in PGSM although they never gave her one in either the anime or the manga. Onto the next chapter!
| Anne Boleyn Fan chapter 3 . 10/23
Another great chapter. Usagi has been a Sailor Moon character I like. She came to be a believable character one could relate to with her being who she was and the basic characteristics of her personality as her blonde hair, her blue eyes, and her fair white skin made her into being an angelic beauty, her being of a bright, cheerful, ditzy, easygoing, funny-loving, and good-natured personality, her favorite animal coming to be rabbits although she liked cats and dogs as well, her favorite colors to be pink and white, her favorite drink to be milkshakes, her favorite foods to include
apple pie homemade by her mother, cake, crepes, donuts, double bacon cheeseburgers in the
North American Dub, ice cream, peanut butter and jelly sandwiches, and Pringles with her least favorite food being carrots, her favorite flower to be roses, her favorite gemstones to be diamonds and pearls with her liking rubies in the manga and rhinestones in the North American Dub, and her favorite school subject being Home Economics with her least favorite school subjects being English and Mathematics, her dislike of coming to do homework and studying for exams, doing chores, exams, failing grades, and getting detention, her fear of dentists, ghosts, and lighting and thunder, and her going on to have hobbies in collecting stuffed animals (mainly rabbits), drawing, eating, fashion, going shopping, playing videogames, reading manga, sleeping, and watching television. Usagi did happen to be a crybaby, a ditz, and an endless klutz, but she also ended up having a good heart and having it in her to accept people for who they were, become friends with them, care about them, do love them, and ending up wanting to give them friendly advice, helping them out, or listening to their problems with patience.
However arrogance and boastfulness had appeared to be in Usagi and her capability of selfishness in both the anime and manga. One might believe it to be possible that that the Ginzuishou would be able to corrupt her especially if she had been feeling all alone with Mamoru being gone once again. Corrupting her could have made Usagi greedy and hunger for power no matter who came to get hurt or killed or what did happen in order to get want she wanted if she had to do so. If Usagi did discover who Ami actually was and her being a member of the Uzumaki clan and her coming to own one of the powerful Celestial blades such as the Hyorinmaru could have made her angry, bitter, and consumed with envy that Ami had owned such a powerful weapon while she, the Moon Princess, did not especially since her being who she was as Princess Serenity of the Moon Kingdom and coming to have a sense of being in charge of other people, coming to have her demands fulfilled whenever she wanted them to be, and entitlement to get anything that others had that she wanted for herself. Ending up finding out that she had been destined to be able to marry Mamoru, come to give birth to their future biological daughter Chibi-Usa, and do rule from Crystal Tokyo over the entire whole Earth with Ami, Makoto, Minako, and Rei coming to meet her demands and ending up spending their entire whole lives guarding her instead of being able to accept someone for who they were, come to care about them, and do fall in love with them, coming to get married and do have children of their own, and them ending up ruling over their own home planets as Queens in their own rights may have gone to her head since she might have taken it for granted that the four of them also had the right to have a good life and happiness for themselves instead of it only being her who got the perfect fairytale to come true for herself. She got used to the one in being in charge of others and coming to get want she wanted and it had to have been a slap of reality in her face when Ami refused to give her what she wanted from her instead of following her orders like she had always been supposed to do in the past. However happy she might have been with Luna backing her up by coming to bring up the White Moon Royal Doctrine decree that any weapon belonging to the Sailor Senshi even if all of them had been royalty themselves and came to own the weapons in their own rights rightfully belonged to the current heir of the White Moon Kingdom and that did mean that Ami had to hand it over whether she liked it or not or die for her refusal to obey the laws of the Moon Kingdom it must have been a great shock for her when Ami countered about giving it up because her clan's Doctrine stated that no outsider should lay hands on the Sacred Blade and the only way that Usagi would end up being able to get it from her was defeating her in combat for it since even Luna gave into what Ami demanded Usagi be prepared to do for it since Queen Selenity had decreed that clan Doctrine overruled the White Moon Royal Decree. It would not be as easy as Usagi as thought for her to get the sacred blade as her own from Ami and her fury over it must have played a great part in her not accepting Ami for who she was, caring nothing for her, and despising her because she dared to defy her instead of doing what she wanted her to do like she always did without question. Losing to Ami in their combat battle for it even though Ami defeated her fairly must have been Usagi's breaking point which did make her declare that Ami had been a traitor and demand of Makoto, Minako, and Rei to execute her out of embarrassment and failure over what had happened since she thought she would be able to defeat Ami and Ami came to prove her wrong in her assumptions.
Ami becoming aware of how Usagi had been unable to accept her for who she was, cared nothing for her, and despised her by Usagi's show of anger and bitterness at her coming to be defeated by Ami to get the sacred blade from her that she wanted and her declarations of wanting Ami dead for it must have had a bad affect on Ami. Ami came to accept Usagi for who she was, became friends with her, cared about her, did love her like a sister, and ended up having a genuine mutual respect and a shared trust in her that Usagi must have had for her for a long time before she snapped. She did feel admiration for Usagi over her bright, cheerful, dreaming, easy-going, fun-loving, and good-natured personality even if she came to disapprove of Usagi's lack of commitment to doing her best at academics, coming to do her homework and do study for exams in order to get good scores in school, ending up being constantly late for school, and frequently getting detention and her ending up being embarrassed over Usagi's horrible eating habits as shown in the anime with Usagi claiming she admired Ami for her academic abilities, her brilliance, her common sense, her diligence, her enjoyment of learning, and her friendly and gentle nature as shown in the anime. Ami enjoyed all of the fun times she had with Makoto, Minako, Rei, and Usagi, fought by their side in countless battles against their enemies, had gone onto save their lives on numerous occasions despite her being the weakest of them due to her brilliance, her common sense, her diligence, and her excellent skills in rational thinking and strategy, and proved herself to be willing to lay down her own life in order to protect Usagi if she had to do it more than once. For Usagi to fling everything they had been through together over the years like it had been nothing to her and go on to label her a traitor who deserved to die because Ami denied her something that belonged to her that she had no right to in the first place had to have been a shock and a terrible slap in the face which made Ami end up being unable to accept Usagi for who she was, care nothing for her, despise her, ended up wanting to have nothing to do with her anymore which led to the end of their friendship with each other, and feel furious at her over her betrayal of her.
It must have been an even bigger shock that made Ami lash out in anger, bitterness, and complete hurt as she had accepted Makoto, Minako, and Rei for who they were, became best friends with them, cared about them, did love them like sisters, and ended up having a genuine mutual respect and a shared trust in them like they came to have for her during the long time of them being Sailor Senshi and ending up fighting against evil together. She believed them to be aware of who the real Usagi was and her becoming arrogant, boastful, and cruel and did happen to be out of control in her greed and hunger for power even no matter who she came to harm or kill or what did happen in the consequences of her actions as long as she got whatever it had been that she wanted. The three of them came to see that Usagi had come to not accept Ami for who she was, care nothing for her, despise her, and ending up betraying Ami by wanting her dead only because Ami denied her something that belonged to her in her own right that she had no entitlement to in the first place, but none of them did show the courage and determination needed to stand up to Usagi to make her realize that what she was doing was wrong and that she needed to stop. Ethics, fairness, guts, and honor did need to be in Sailor Senshi who were meant to uphold justice even if it had been to the one they had sworn to protect that needed to be stopped, but the three of them ended up being divided by their commitments in their duty as Sailor Senshi to Usagi and doing the right thing and Ami felt furious with them for it. Her going on to declare to them that she ended up giving up being who she was as Sailor Mercury, coming to be unable to accept them for who they were, caring nothing for them, and despising them, daring to renounce her loyalty to the White Moon Kingdom, and ending her friendships with them with her ending up wanting to do with them any longer out of her anger for them being cowards and coming not to do the right thing by standing up to Usagi when they should have as a betrayal towards her shows how much
| Anne Boleyn fan chapter 2 . 10/22
A great chapter. You have been a brilliant, creative, and descriptive writer. Ami Mizuno comes to be my favorite Sailor Moon character with Minako Aino being my second favorite Sailor Moon character and Makoto Kino being my third favorite Sailor Moon character although I do like Rei Hino as well. You do portray with accuracy who Ami was and the basic characteristics of her personality as I see her to be with her being to me a beauty in her own way with her blue hair, her blue eyes, and her fair white skin, her coming to be brilliant, curious, diligent, elegant, friendly, and graceful, her favorite animal did happening to be cats although she liked dogs and fish as well, her favorite colors to be aquamarine and blue, her favorite drinks to be apple juice and bottled water, her favorite foods to be anmitsu, honey, and sandwiches with her least favorite food being yellowtail, her favorite flower to be Water Lily, her favorite gemstone to be sapphire, and her favorite school subjects to be Mathematics and Science with her having no school subjects that she disliked, her dislike of arguments, bullies, coming to not be the best at academics, do getting called names or insulted by her classmates, ending up being late for school, and finding other people wasting her own time or that of others, her dream to become a doctor, her embarrassment in her guilty pleasures of pop culture and romance novels, her fear of failure, her good points being at academics, books, calculations, and doing her homework and ending up studying for exams, her hobbies in computers, drawing and painting, ending up writing song lyrics in the anime, foreign languages, going to the park, knitting in PGSM, listening to music, playing chess, reading books, and swimming, her having problems with love letters and practical jokes, and her struggles against her self-esteem being low in herself and trust towards others which made her seem like a believable character to me. I enjoy reading how Ami came to capture Kyoya's fascination in her at a charity dinner party that she attended with her mother Saeko and how Kyoya did seem to see that both Ami's parents had contributed to her becoming who she was and the basic characteristics of her personality since Ami had mostly likely inherited her artistic tendencies from her father who had been a world-renowned traveling artist and her brains, her common sense, her drive, her enjoyment of learning, and her fondness of academics and books from her mother since Saeko had to have worked hard to become a doctor and it being rumored that Ami had an IQ of 300, but that rumor about her had been unconfirmed which had made her interesting and worth him keeping an eye on her. I found Ami's embarrassment in not being able to recognize who Kyoya was at first right away making her believe that she had been rude to him since he had been the youngest son of the Otori empire which came to amuse him and her flushing over realizing that she had not known of herself being quite as well-known as him with her getting to know from him that she had been a rising star in the medical world to have been in character for Ami. It got to be great to see how Kyoya and Ami first meet and him going on to flirt with her at the charity dinner and how the two of them did dance together at it with both of them insisting that neither of them had been good dancers. Ami had been wrong about that since she seemed to be a decent dancer in the anime although Makoto had been better than her since both only Makoto and her had passed the Princess Seminar that Ami, Makoto, Minako, and Rei had snuck into attend with Usagi while Minako, Rei, and Usagi had seemed to be terrible dancers that led to the three of them all failing it. It had been good to see in the flashbacks how Ami's relationship with Kyoya began and how the two of them came to get engaged to be married in the future.
| Anne Boleyn Fan chapter 1 . 10/22
A great prologue with which to begin the story with Ami Mizuno coming to get the same chance that Usagi had with Mamoru to find someone who accepted her for who she was, cared about, did fall in love with her, and ended up having a genuine mutual respect and a shared trust in her the way that she did with him. Ami had been given the chance for a good life and happiness with her boyfriend in this chapter. I came to find it not being fair as to why Usagi had gotten to have everything including the chance for a good life and happiness in her future while her friends Ami, Makoto, Minako, and Rei only got to have little scraps of what she did in their lives or nothing at all. It did not seem fair to any of the four of them. Forward to chapter one!
| badgirl1990 chapter 8 . 10/22
Another great chapter. It had been good to see that both Makoto and Minako had made themselves aware of who Usagi actually was and her being out of control with her greed and her hunger for power even if it meant that she had to take by force that which belonged to others by right. You came to capture with accuracy of who Makoto and Minako were and the basic characteristics of their personality. Makoto and Minako do happen to be my other two favorite characters beside Ami since the both of them had been relatable characters. I enjoy Makoto because of her beauty from her long and naturally curly brown hair that she did wear up in a ponytail in a green ponytail holder with two green balls on it and green eyes with her pink rose earrings in her ears and her coming to be bright, courageous, driven, energetic, friendly, and gentle as well as strong and tough along with her favorite animals being horses and tropical fish, her favorite colors being green and sugar pink, her favorite drink being chamomile tea, her favorite foods being cherry pie and meatloaf, her favorite flower being the Sakura, her favorite gemstone being emeralds, and her favorite school subject being Home Economics with her least favorite school subject being Physics, her coming to dislike bullies, cheaters, and liars, her deep fear of airplanes, and her ending up having feminine hobbies in arts and crafts, baking and cooking, cleaning, dancing especially ballet, enjoying romance novels, flower arranging, gardening, having to collect cute things for her apartment, ice skating, knitting, and sewing with her more masculine hobbies being into marital arts and coming to play sports such as basketball as well as her being into going shopping, listening to music, and playing videogames. I feel fond of Minako because of her beauty from her blonde hair that came down to her waist which she wore a big red hair ribbon in, her blue eyes, and her fair skin and her coming to have a bright, cheerful, defiant, easygoing, funny, and good-natured personality as well as the courage and dedication in being Sailor Venus along with her favorite animals being birds, her favorite colors being red, orange, yellow, and pink, her favorite drink being Oolong tea, her favorite foods being curry, ramen noodles, stuffed dumplings, and sweets like cake, chocolate, donuts, and ice cream with her least favorite food being Shiitake mushrooms, her favorite flowers being orange dandelions and orchids, her favorite gemstone being topaz, and her favorite school subject being Physical Education with her least favorite school subjects being English and Mathematics, her coming to dislike bullies, chores, doing homework or end up studying for exams, losing, nasty kids, and showoffs, her dealing with having problems with her mother and the police, and her hobbies ending up being in attending auditions in acting, dancing, and singing whenever possible, collecting stuffed animals, drawing, eating, flirting with cute boys, gymnastics, idol chasing, knitting, listening to music, manga, playing videogames, running, shopping, television, watching romantic movies, and volleyball. It got to be good that both Makoto and Minako get to pursue their dreams with Makoto going to a culinary school and Minako having the chance of a singing contract and be happy. I love how Usagi got angry with them over refusing to tell her where Ami had gone in order to protect her showing that they realize they had been wrong not to stand up for Ami against Usagi in the first place and that Makoto and Minako still accepted Ami for who she was, been friends with her, cared about her, and did love her like a sister since they have begun to apologize to Ami and come to make amends for what they did wrong to her in the past which shows that the three of the might be able to mend the damage done in their friendships with her in the future. Usagi howling that Makoto and Minako had betrayed her by not coming to accept Ami for who she was, caring nothing for her, and despising her like she did and ending up protecting her for her wrath and coming to leave to pursue their own dreams with her saying that they could not leave since they were her Sailor Senshi and it was their duty to protect her so they had to stay if she told them to, but Makoto and Minako reminding her that they had been aware that the Gods had punished her for her crimes by making her not being who she was as Princess Serenity of the Moon Kingdom anymore and coming to take away her powers as Sailor Moon which caused them to no longer have any duty towards her and ended up freeing them to do what they want. It must mean that now Usagi no longer accepted Makoto and Minako for who they were, cared nothing for them, and despised them since she ended up seeing them as traitors against her like she did with Ami with Makoto and Minako most likely coming to no longer accept Usagi for who she was, caring nothing for her, and despising her for her arrogance, her being out of control with her greed and her hunger for power, her cruelty, and her desire to deny them the right to have a good life and happiness since only she had the right to it along with ending up preventing them from getting their full power for themselves as well as being angry at Rei for going along with her in it. I like how Ami got to go to the University that she wanted to go to and that Ami had received a power boast in this chapter. Onto the next chapter!
| badgirl1990 chapter 6 . 10/22
Another great chapter! Being arrogant and boastful, coming to tell Zeus himself that she had been above everyone else because of who she was and coming to be the Moon Princess with her implying even the Gods themselves, and declaring that it gave her the right to take anything that she wanted even if it belonged to others had been a dumb move on Usagi's part. Could she not realize that saying such things to the Gods and telling them what to do with her demands of ordering them to let her go since they needed her would make the Gods unable to accept her for who she was, care nothing for her, and despise her since they ended up having punished humans for arrogance and boastfulness in claiming to be better than they were in the past and had issues with being commanded by humans telling them what to do? Do knowing their Greek and Roman Mythology would have been something for the Sailor Senshi to need to have learned, but Usagi would have ended up not taking it seriously as she did the rest of her education so of course she would lack the brain and the common sense to realize that making the Gods even more furious with her than they already had been would have been a mistake that she should not have made which even both Luna and Rei seemed to know not to do. From knowing my Greek and Roman Mythology I would have known not to mess with the Gods since the punishments they gave to humans who committed acts of offenses against them had been something that no one in their right mind would want to face if I were Usagi. Setsuna had gotten to be angry at Luna, Rei, and Usagi for what they had done to Ami and her having bloodlust in her eyes when she testified against them had been a nice touch. If Usagi had kept the Inner Senshi of becoming aware of who they were and coming to obtain the power that belonged to them by right by denying to give it to them even though she had no right to do since she wanted to have control over them and did happen to be the most powerful of all of them then Usagi along with the aid of Artemis and Luna had committed crimes against not only Apollo the Sun God, Athena the Goddess of Wisdom, and Hermes the Messenger God for what they did to Ami, but also against Aphrodite the Goddess of Love and Beauty, Ares the God of War, and Zeus himself the King of the Gods by what they did to Makoto, Minako, and Rei although Rei had partly herself to blame for it since she helped Artemis, Luna, and Usagi come to put restrictions on Ami's powers to make her the weakest out of all of them. So Makoto and Minako know about their crimes against them later then the three of them should also be made to give compensation to them for what they did to them. I like how Zeus punished Usagi by coming to take away from her who she was as Princess Serenity of the Moon Kingdom and her powers which mean that she would not be able to become Neo-Queen Serenity of the Earth Kingdom in the future even if she married Mamoru or if she did Mamoru would be the one with the power between the two of them while she would be just a figurehead. Mainly with how greedy and hungry for power Usagi had been she would come to be angry and bitter over the prospect of that kind of future with her not getting to be the one to be allowed to get married, come to have a child of her own, and do rein happily over Earth while the others had to serve her by protecting her with none of them getting to have their own lives which is something she seemed to think only she should have. She probably would blame Ami for it and come to hold her responsible for her being punished for her actions by the Gods since the lesson of actions having consequences that one must deal with that they seem to want to have taught her will probably not sink into her skull. So Artemis got punished along with Luna even though he had not been present along with her to receive his punishment in person.
| badgirl1990 chapter 5 . 10/21
Another great chapter. Ami had been depressed after Usagi coming to not accept her for who she was, caring nothing for her, despising her, and ending up wanting her dead simply to due to her having a celestial sword that Usagi wanted her to give over to her even though it belonged to Ami in her own right. She came to accept Makoto, Minako, Rei, and Usagi for who they were, became friends with them, cared about them, did love them as sisters, and ended up having a genuine respect and trust in them and she did fight alongside them against the forces of evil for a long time, but they did throw everything they had been through out of the window after they betrayed her because she came to refuse to give Usagi something that she wanted and came to refuse seeing that Usagi wanting her dead had been something they should have refused to tolerate in their leader. Deciding to give up being who she was and coming to be Sailor Mercury must have been difficult for her to do since it had been a major part of her life for so long, but in the end it had been the right thing to do since Usagi proved herself to be brutal and cruel with her being deadly in her greed and her hunger for power and Makoto, Minako, and Rei proved they had no code of ethics, fairness, guts, or honor that they were supposed to have as Sailor Senshi by letting Usagi get away with whatever she wanted to do even when they knew she had been in the wrong. The four of them ended up being loyal to Usagi no matter what. So Kyoga found himself becoming aware of who Ami was and the basic characteristics of her personality along with her coming to be Sailor Mercury by sending out watchers to keep tabs on her about the numerous occasions of supernatural events around Ami because of his fascination with her. Good of him to keep his lips sealed about Ami's secret identity as Sailor Mercury. I like how Ami found out that he knew about her being betrayed by the Inner Senshi and coming to cheer her up with gifts of white lilies since water lilies had been Ami's favorite flowers. It was interesting that she figured out that he had been the one who kept on sending her gifts of flowers after she met him in her university and that she got to be stunned that he had started to do so as soon as he laid eyes on her because she intrigued him just as he knew that Ami had been in the right after her fallout with the others even though he found it a pity that the other girls could not see it the same way that he did. Kind of funny how Ami asked him why he had not been freaked out by a talking cat such as Artemis or Luna, but that he joked that it could have been worse like a talking lizard. I liked how he let her know that what really bothered him was that Usagi had been the only one who had the ability to destroy an enemy and how come it had been specifically her instead of any of the others with him cutting Ami off by telling her to save it if she was going to say it had been because Usagi was their best friend. He made a good point about what kind of best friend would leave the rest of them come to be high and dry with little to no abilities of their own to protect themselves from an attack from the enemy with them being unable to destroy the enemy themselves and ended up forcing them to rely on her to save them from danger. Probably so that they would be grateful to Usagi which would keep her in control of them and in her debt out of gratitude for saving them over and over again for her be the one with power over them?
| badgirl1990 chapter 4 . 10/21
Another great chapter. Kyoya and Ami had accepted each other for who they were, cared about each other, did love each other, and ended up having a mutual respect and a shared trust in each other. Both of them have a lot in common with each other with their academic abilities, their brilliance, their common sense, and their drives. Kyoya came to want to give Ami a good life and make her happy and Ami did deserve it especially with how he had been old-fashioned enough to formally ask Ami's grandfather for her hand in marriage. Ami ended up knowing how to fight with a sword as shown in PGSM so it seemed normal for her to have had training in swordsmanship. I found it interesting that her grandfather had always drilled in her head that deception had been the way of the shinboi and that deception would allow her to differentiate between ally and foe with Kyoya asking her whether she meant Makoto, Minako, Rei, and Usagi, but she neither agreed nor disagreed with them. I guess that their betrayal towards her hit her hard.
| badgirl1990 chapter 3 . 10/21
Another good chapter. Basically Usagi came to be unable to accept Ami for who she was, care nothing for her, despise her, and end up wanting to see her dead since she fell to the dark influence of the Ginzuishou with it making her greedy and hungry for power since she wanted to possess the Celestial blade that belonged to Ami by right since she thought that she would be able to use it better than Ami would be able to, but Ami refused to give it to her? How could the Royal Moon doctrine have the right to decree that any weapon that belonged to the Sailor Senshi belong to the current heir to the Moon Kingdom when all of the Sailor Senshi had been Planetary Princesses of their own home planets in their own rights with them most likely being in line to inherit the thrones of their own home planets? All of them did happen to have been royalty in their own rights during the Silver Millennium so that would have made them equal to Princess Serenity of the Moon Kingdom in terms of ranks. Why would they end up making it a law that if a Sailor Senshi refused to hand over a weapon that rightfully belonged to them by right to the current heir to the Moon Kingdom would be put to death for their refusals to do so? For them to take the power away from the others that belonged to them by rights through force just for them to get to stay in charge over the others had been evil. For Usagi to go on to order Makoto, Minako, and Rei to kill her even after Ami beat her in combat for the blade which made Ami coming to keep it fair had shown that the Moon Kingdom had no sense of fairness and got to be greedy and hungry for power that never belonged to them in the first place. How would going onto to kill Ami even after she beat Usagi in combat over the blade with her clan doctrine overpowering White Moon Royal Doctrine give Usagi any right to the blade? It showed that Usagi had been greedy and hungry for power and that she would do whatever she had to do to get her hands on what she wanted no matter who came to get hurt or what did happen because of it showing low she had morally sank. It had been wrong that Makoto, Minako, and Rei would have been willing to kill Ami just because Usagi wanted her dead and Artemis and Luna ended up wanting her executed despite them supposedly "having" accepted Ami for who she was, became friends with her, cared about her, did love her like a sister, and ending up having respect for her and shared trust in her the way she did with them and everything they went through with their enemies over the years with her coming to help them do their homework or end up studying for exams and did being the one who came up with strategies that saved their lives again and again during their battles. Makoto and Minako seem to have known that what Usagi wanted them to do to Ami was wrong, but they had been willing to go along with it anyway and Rei had all been willing to do what Usagi wanted. Luna, Makoto, Minako, and Rei had been shocked after Ami came to announce she would stop being who she was and coming to be Sailor Mercury and disavowed her duty to protecting Sailor Moon and ending her allegiance to the Moon Kingdom considering they had betrayed her and came to try to kill her just to gain a powerful weapon for Usagi that she had no right to in the first place? It would have made me unable to accept them for who they were, care nothing for them, despise them, and end up wanting nothing to do with them just like they did Ami since Ami had been right that they had no sense of fairness, good morals, or honor like they were supposed to have as Sailor Senshi. So Rei proved herself to be Usagi's lapdog by making multiple attempts to kill her for the blade and causing Usagi embarrassment in defeating her because Luna ordered her to do so, but Usagi relied on Minako to come talk Ami into coming back to the Sailor Senshi maybe as a trap for her to ambush Ami though Minako seemed to be unaware of it and confused about Rei's attempts to kill her on Luna's orders? That Hakura and Michiru still accepted Ami for who she was, been friends with her, cared about her, did love her like a sister, and ended up having mutual respect and shared trust in her the way that she did with them with them being on Ami's side over the Inner Senshi's betrayal of her had been great. They respect Ami for her her academic abilities, her brilliance, her courage, her drive, her enjoyment of learning, and her fast rational and strategy skills which she proved to Hakura by saving her life when they had been trapped in Nehllennia's mirror. They seemed to have been implying to Minako that Ami had been deliberately kept from the same upgrades to her powers that Makoto and Rei as well as Minako must have gotten. Their anger over Inner Sailor Senshi's betrayal of Ami with Usagi coming to not accept her for who she was, caring nothing for her, despising her, and ending up wanting her dead when Ami defeated her in combat to prevent her clan's heirloom from falling into the wrong hands like she had been supposed to do and Luna ended up ordering her execution over it with Makoto, Minako, and Rei either agreeing with it or coming to not stand up for her to stop it had been great. Them protecting Ami by not letting the Inner Senshi know they knew where she had been when they had been looking for her since Luna put a death sentence on her head showed that they would be there for Ami even if her other so-called "teammates" refused to do so and sucked up to Usagi instead treating Ami like dirt just to please Usagi. I wonder what Ami means about taking the matter up with the Pantheon Council again?
| badgirl1990 chapter 2 . 10/21
Another good chapter. You have been a brilliant, creative, and descriptive writer which had been shown in the stories of yours I have read so far. I consider myself to be a good judge on it since I love to read books and write stories with me working on writing my own books to publish since I want to be an author. I do like your accuracy of who Ami was and the basic characteristics of her personality through Kyoga's observations of her since it showed how both of Ami's biological parents had contributed to it. Ami ended up having brilliance, curiosity, drive, an enjoyment of learning, and fine rational and strategic skills which she most likely inherited from her mother shown through her deep love of academics, books, and computers and her dream to become a doctor like her mother, but she found herself also inheriting athletic skills and artistic tendencies from her father since she did enjoy art (drawing and painting), chess, listening to music, and swimming like he did. Funny of how Ami thinks herself to be a bad dancer when in the anime only both Makoto and her had been shown to be good dancers when they attended the Princess Seminar that Usagi went to with both Minako and Rei. Makoto had gotten to be better at it than her, but she did just fine herself at since both Makoto and her passed the Princess Seminar while Minako, Rei, and Usagi failed it.
| badgirl1990 chapter 1 . 10/21
A good prologue to begin this story with although while I have seen the Sailor Moon anime and gotten my hands on all of the manga books of Sailor Moon which made me a big fan of it I am not familiar with Ouran High School Host Club. By reading your stories I became aware of other Japanese anime that I did not know existed. I can keep a list on other Japanese anime that I should check out from what I have read from your Sailor Moon cross-overs with them.
| Angel of Courage chapter 42 . 9/9/2012
Ami's excited at the end XD Love that! And Venusly? Huh...well, it works Love how you added the guys to the mix (*though I'm wondering if Mori found someone...and what happened to Rei after the whole 'I was wrong' thing*). You did an amazing job on the epilogue! :)
Keep up the good work!