Reviews for The Balestone Chronicles, Book I: The Pendant of Aérùen
xXimmortalXx chapter 22 . 1/31
I read this story once, forgot about it, and now I found it again!
And it is really good!
Chester Ashford chapter 22 . 1/7
First thing to make clear, yeah I'll begrudgingly accept that some part of that delay was my fault, but hey you know I had to make you concentrate on your other charges :P there was a mission to be accomplished :D

Lol anyways, despite having known the concept and summary of this chapter before hand, the finished product still has as much awesome impact as all the previous ones have had :D Loved the Magus Arcanum ofcourse... and loved Tiberius' outfit ;)

I know youre usually hesitant to write very dialogue heavy chapters with many characters participating, but I'd like to point this chapter (21) out as an example of how a chapter can be crowded with important characters, be mostly be focused on dialogue and still be as awesome as some of the action oriented chapters :D

And now looking forward to another epic fight the likes of which we havent seen since chapter 17 :D the fellowship thats gone to fight the Forsaken is really a great combinations of bring it on :D will be waiting for your next chapter... and pushing you to write it sooner :P
Guest chapter 22 . 1/4
Great, read this a few months ago and loved it, just came back here today and saw that it has been updated, another great chapter :) This is one of my favourite fanfics.
fortheloveofchocolate chapter 22 . 1/3
Yay! You updated!
I don't think you lost 98% of your readers... Well, I'm not exactly the most loyal followers of stories but I'm still here!
I'm not sure what to say here, you know I love your work and this this story.
SGJBMCfan98 chapter 22 . 1/3
Yay! You updated! This was a very good chapter btw! I wanna know whats gunna happen next! Please update soon!
WizKid chapter 22 . 1/2
Oh! My! God! *Major, major cyber hug* I'm so glad your back...I've been waiting for you ;-) LOL!
I've been good just bored! Hardly anyone has been posting fanfics on a regular basis so I've not had much to read, but now your back! (Encase you haven't realized I'm so pleased you're back)
Your story again FANTASTIC. So gripping. You have a great imagination, please, please, please update ASAP!
I need to read more! xxxxxxxxx :-D :-D
Pumpkin-love33 chapter 22 . 1/2
Its sad that so many have stopped reading your story :( I think your one of the most talented writers on :D Im looking forward to the next chapter! ;) :) ;)
Bloody Smile chapter 21 . 12/6/2013
AAARGH, CLIFFHANGER! :(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((
Blast it! I hate cliffhangers!
Anyways, it's fantastic! I've loved reading it, and although I was frustrated by their stupidity in ignoring the pendant (though it's not entirely their fault, come to think of it), I love it! I do hope the Bad - REAL - Alex returns soon...This 'nice' version of her is so sweet that I feel like puking; I'm looking forward to her snarky commentary again! :D
You should get to work on the tense-skipping thing, but other than that, it's pretty close to flawless. Please continue! Don't abandon it halfway, I'm begging you! D:
singergirl101 chapter 21 . 11/23/2013
Wow, this is one of the most amazing stories I have ever read. You really know how to capture someones attention. I just read this story for well over an hour straight and did not lose interest once. It's all confusing but you released revealing information at all the right places. I love how this story is so original and how all of the characters are well developed and everything is explained perfectly. I am severely impressed. This is amazing, wow. Update as soon as you can because I am hanging on this story, I love it. Update soon!
xXimmortalXx chapter 21 . 11/1/2013
guestie chapter 21 . 10/24/2013
I really love your story! Update soon!
WizKid chapter 21 . 8/30/2013
Amazing as ever. Keep writing, update soon please. Xxxxxxxx
Tina02 chapter 21 . 8/20/2013
Omigosh! Talk about tense! I'm so glad all the Russos are involved and I love how it was technically Max that led everyone to find out about the pendant. Really great chapter, please update soon! Please please please! ;)
Guest chapter 21 . 8/19/2013
Amazing! Update soon, or... Something will happen? XD
fortheloveofchocolate chapter 21 . 8/19/2013
They only realised it was the pendant now? Really slow!
Thanks, and you're hands can fall off for all I care as long as I get to read this story. Just kidding!
The docter thinks my tinnitus might be permanent, or last very long atleast. At first it was very scary! You're right, it can only be described as like a phantom noise!
Anyways, really good chapter. I really like how your chapters are never really really short unlike others authors on this site.
Keep up the good work!
PS. Kate says you should die in hell.
PPS. I'm so sorry but Kate made me put that there.
PPPS. Don't die in hell, please please please!
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