|Reviews for Coercion|
| LtsHrIt4ThBoyz chapter 19 . 11/7/2014
Yes, I've been enjoying your story and I'm definitely going to add it to my favs (if it's not in there already), but THIS is DRIVING ME CRAZY: The word is EMPATHIC NOT emPHATIC! A guide is an EMPATH! They have enhanced EMPATHY receptors and can send EMPATHETIC waves to soothe or comfort someone in distress or bolster their Sentinel's abilities. A Guide's EMPATHIC abilities are what it's all about, man.
Please try to work on using the correct terminology in the future? You've got great talent, but misusing CORE/canon terminology throws the reader right out of the story!
Thanks for the story and I'm hoping to read more of your work.
| Monki-Neko chapter 9 . 11/28/2013
i know you probably don't mean anything by it and it wasn't deliberate but maybe you could use a different analogy those last few lines? "blair stood in the middle of the living room wrapped in the blanket from the settee like an indian on a reservation." that "indian on a reservation" part feels a bit wrong-ignorant, to be frank. im not native american or descended of, myself, but it feels like a casually racist comparison. especially since reservations aren't known for their safe, healthy neighborhoods.
| Patty1965 chapter 20 . 7/21/2013
This is good. You should write a sequel! :-)
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
Great story like the AU, the bonding and spirit guides
| atymer chapter 20 . 6/20/2013
Wow, it has been awhile since I found a new Sentinel story, especially one in Susan's Uni.
I am grateful to the author for doing and Au of the Au. LOL
It has only fueled the desire for more sentinel stories. I suppose I will have to re read my favs to satisfy the urge. Thanks for writing.
| HonorLove chapter 20 . 1/21/2013
Loved the story! Thank you letting us all see your world of Sentinels & Guides. Looking forward to your next story, whether a sequel or something new.
| Jirel chapter 20 . 10/29/2012
Thank you so much for writing this wonderful story, I really love stories that hypothesize a universe full of sentinels and guides. I enjoyed the heck out of it although I have to admit that a small part of me wonders if the young guides being experimented on were saved or not. I saw something about video of the tests run against them but I can't remember if they were saved or not. And I'd love to "see" the Hunt against those who did the experimenting.
| SurvivorCat chapter 20 . 10/14/2012
Woohh what a cool story! I really really enjoy it! I wish you write a secuel! Maybe a little high in rating? Or not.. anyway i like it very much your writting is really cool :D
| Connie chapter 10 . 9/26/2012
Damn. Poor Blair!
You've really made me care about all the characters. Taggart is lovely. Would that we ALL had our own Joel when life stinks, y'know?
| Guest chapter 9 . 9/26/2012
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/26/2012
LOL! I'd buy this story if for no other reason than the term "sentinelmental!" Hee! Love it. Great name for a zine, if you ask me.
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/26/2012
Tiny quibble: What IS a "saloon car?" NEXT CHAPTER-NOW!
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/26/2012
Caught only one typo (though it's quite possible others may exist; I was just so engrossed!). You have Jim "blow threw" some doors (near the end of the page). It should, of course, be "through."
Enough! On to the next chapter! BEG
| Dreamweaver chapter 20 . 9/10/2012
Hurrah for happy endings!
| SISTURNICKYAHOO chapter 20 . 9/9/2012
THANKS FOR WRITING A REALLY GOOD DIFFERENT STORY ON JIM AND BLAIR. LOVED THAT JIM SAW WHAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN TO BLAIR THROUGH BLAIR'S EYE VIEW! THANKS FOR WRITING A WELL WRITTEN INTERESTING SENTINEL STORY..!