|Reviews for A True Daughter of the Black|
| Guest chapter 12 . 9/21
the good ol' pincer, i love it!
| Guest chapter 9 . 9/21
wow, Bill is weak
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/21
if this is canon Harry then yes, he was abused, physically i dont know, emotionally, hell yes. For their criminal negligence and emotional abuse the Dursleys would end up in prison.
| Souseiki chapter 2 . 7/19
Andromeda is extremely pragmatic about this whole affair. She is choosing the lesser evil. Watching her negotiate with Kingsley is pretty admirable. As for Harry, he's still learning. I wonder how the Weasleys will fit in with all of these changes with Harry and Hermione.
| Souseiki chapter 1 . 7/19
Interesting premise. I love seeing Andromeda's Slytherin side. Adding the intellect and ruthlessness of her Black heritage, Harry's life is going to take an interesting turn. The timeline feels a bit rushed, especially when Harry lost his virginity. However, him learning how to "negotiate" from Andromeda seems like aspects if his personality change.
| Ibskib chapter 7 . 6/20
Like the other chapters this could use a bit more proofreading, which is a shame it's an engaging story marred by too many sloppy errors:
rank in file - rank and file
that she said - what she said
like there - like where
arraigned - arranged
with warm - with a warm
be here - be there
ignored reason - ignored the reason
Diagon Ally - Diagon Alley
signal the ICW - signal to the ICW
full-proof - fool-proof
of building - of the building
| InquisitorCOC chapter 16 . 5/22
It's a fantastic story.
My only gripe is that Bill Weasley was completely OOC.
Luna was so cute, and Andy was brilliant.
| evans16 chapter 15 . 5/11
| evans16 chapter 16 . 5/11
| Orion Albus Snap chapter 16 . 4/21
Granddaddy be nice.
| icestick chapter 2 . 4/19
Barrel of lol
| icestick chapter 1 . 4/19
Teddy is one smart wizard.
| Wow.JustWow chapter 1 . 4/4
That was the most clinical, least erotic description of a sexual encounter ever. It was completely brilliant and very well done indeed.
| bocoenders chapter 16 . 2/14
Awesome story, It was a littel bit random at some times, bút it was stil nice. x
| HeavenlyOmega chapter 16 . 2/7
Zomg. This might be the only (and the best) Fleur/Snape fic.