|Reviews for Fire In The Sky|
| mara-isamoose chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
*CHOKES ON TEARS AND BROKEN SOBS*
| mandancie chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
oh wow! this was really good!
| Aranna Undomiel chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
This was a really sad story, knowing this isn't a story for everyone, that there are people who have to go through life like that...
Loved awesome Dean and cute Sammy as always :)
| SayLo chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
That Was Awesome, the love the bond The Dean just flr sammy his bro his fam his angel his own no matter how harn life might get, for him or sam. Thanks for sharing
| AlElizabeth chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
Good themed fic for the American readers... I'm Canadian so I don't celebrate the fourth but know all about it. Dean's continuing to be an awesome brother to Sam (as always in your fics). Great job!
| TinTin11 chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
| sammynanci chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Poor things the boys! Poor thing my Sammy! If already it had had a convulsion in the dining room could not it see the fireworks in peace? Do I suffer of only thinking that the life of the two was like that of difficult and unjust? Is Sammy going to recover at some time? Will they be these assaults something more than epilepsy? Probably the demon's blood in his body was doing devastations in him while it was growing because of it these migraines and nightmares that they mention in in John's Diary. In end, I liked much what I read, since always, but I suffered too much with these damned assaults! Thank you for publishing, especially part in which Dean raises in his arms Sam and the small one huddles in his lap.
| Steliyana chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
This story is AMAZING! I love it so, so much that I can't even begin to tell you. It left me speechless - definitely one of your best stories! I love how you described every situation in details, especially the brotherly moments. You give us a chance to see Sam and Dean's points of view and their thoughts on what was happening. It is very heart warming and touching. I liked how you made it clear that Dean loves Sam but Sam loves Dean too and as strongly as his big brother.
Thank you for writing this great story and for sharing it with us!
| PenAndInkPrincess chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Great job! I'm glad that you didn't gloss over what happens during a seizure. I have a friend who's epileptic (thank goodness his isn't as severe as Sam's in this fic), and he's lost control of his bladder a few times. It's humiliating for him, even when reminded it isn't his fault.
You also did an excellent job of how people will stare. Strangers mean well, but sometimes they can just make it worse for the person.
I also enjoyed the protectiveness of Dean over Sam; it's perfectly in-character. Fave!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Sweet and brotherly, emotional and well-decribed. Superb story!
This part, for some reason, stuck with me the longest...
"Sammy. I'm not trying to pick a fight with you," Dean began reasonably, staring meaningfully at his little brother across the table. "But eat the fucking pancakes. Seriously."
...Made me laugh SUPER hard, but also made me smile at Dean's caring, even though he may express it unconventionally. Purely awesome. :)
Great work! :)
| CeCe Away chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
*Sometimes taking a risk was worth the experience...even if you had to deal with the consequences.*
Exactly. Love this.
| Jane88 chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Amazing story! Dean's the best brother ever. Sam's so right: "How can anything be as awesome as you?" :) I'm glad they got to watch at least some part of the fireworks. Epilepsy sucks but you shouldn't barricade yourself in your room either. Great description of their struggles with it and emotions. Would love to read more epileptic Sam, maybe some years later... :)
| ziggy.uk chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
Amazing story in your epileptic Sam series. Just loved how Dean could guage, sometimes just before Sam even knew, that he was going to have a seizure and how he managed to get him to the motel room before the seizure hit. Awesome how he took care of Sam with, doing what had to be done and hoping his little brother wouldn't remember his 'accident'. And who could resist Sam's pleading and his puppy dog eyes when Dean wasn't too sure if going to the fireworks would be a good idea after all? Perfect Dean's reaction to the stickybeak crowd when they started taking more notice of Sam's seizure than the fireworks and could just imagine him draping his leather jacket over his little brother to save his embarrassment, then picking him up and carrying him back to the motel. Adored the ending, Sam saying that it was worth the seizure actually getting to see fireworks up close rather than just on the TV.
As usual you have both boys so in character and believable - a really fantastic read.
| skag trendy chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
Oh wow! I absolutely adored this fic. You did a stirling job as usual, writing the brothers exactly as they were meant to be. I couldn't possible list everything that was great about this story; it was ALL perfect!
Well done, sweetie!
| Fuzzball457 chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
Really nice! I think you got both brothers down to a T here. Especially with Sam's embarrassment. And with how Dean acted towards the crowd during the seizure when they made comments like 'it's like in the movies' That was sweet to see. I always love how you weave in little lines here and there that show the brother's devotion even when it's not a big emotional scene. It creates such an AW affect. They might have to put Aw affect in the dictionary just for your writing. ;) Can't wait for more from you! (And on a completely unrelated, just kind of coincidental note, I've been watching Independence Day - my favorite movie of all time! - all day today because there was a marathon. So this was a very nice conclusion to my science fiction fourth of July marathon. Thanks!)