Reviews for in the dark of night
Rose-Aki chapter 1 . 4/4/2014
Very touching and beautifully written :)
fictonal character chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
*sobs* Welp, there goes my happy mood.
Hiddensecret564 chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
"His tears were her secret."
I love that line so much!
marblesharp chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Nice idea, and lovely execution. Poor Mako. D':
Luna Maria Boulevardes chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
really well done. I like that Mako doesn't realize what he's doing, and that Korra loves him enough to take care of him like that. Also really liked that it all started with her cramps - nice little twist.
ada69 chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Poor Mako. :( Nice work on this though!
RachieFly chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Hmm...this is deep...I like it a lot, to say the least. Great job with this story.
BeGodlyBeLynn chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
This was great! It was pretty sad, but not to the point of all-out angst. More like sad and tender. I liked your projection of Korra's thoughts and feelings, it felt very natural.
Mako's Eyebrows chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
T.T *dies*
nicolababola chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
great job.
SparrowEyes chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
feathersnow chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
TT_TT Poor Poor Mako! I resent for this as a completed story. CONTINUE THIS!
SweettFace chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
awwww poor Mako. That was so beautifully written. :)
123itsmemary chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Poor Mako.
He just wants someone to be there for him and fill that void (even though, no one ever could). :(
Ski October chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Oh, poor Mako D:

If it's this bad for him - Mr. Stoicism - how bad must it be for Bolin?
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