Reviews for The Third Strike
comade chapter 2 . 3/9
Awesome :D
Elani chapter 2 . 9/13/2012
I really enjoyed this story! I've been looking for something that was Bonnie/Damon but without being to strictly set after a specific book and this was perfect.

My favourite parts were when you wrote Bonnie and Damon together I think you really did the romantic tension between them well.

There were a couple of grammar mistakes. The one that stood out the most was you used lied when it should have been lay or perhaps laid depending on the sentence.
Alexis chapter 2 . 9/8/2012
I loved it. So much. SOOO much. You have no idea :)))
Alexis chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Oh my gosh! I'm addicted! Oh my gosh. I don't think I'll get enough. I'm scared to go to chapter two bc there won't be more chapters afterwards! Amazing job :)))
Pheonix of the Night chapter 2 . 7/24/2012
I love this story! XD
Guest chapter 2 . 7/10/2012
I loved it! You have to write more about Bonnie and Damon, please! Poor Xander :( He will have to deal with it! hahahahahahaha Congratulations, It is a great fanfic.
tizy chapter 2 . 7/8/2012
wow...it's beautiful...
xXPrincess-of-DarknessxXx chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
I love it
Guest chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
Awwww so cute!
RayenMacawi chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
I enjoyed your story very much...so nicely written and sweet. I liked that someone found out about them at the end, though I would certainly like to see Elena, Stefan and Meredith expressions. Thanks!
JessiRocks95 chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
I always love your stories! This is my new favorite! I loved it! :)
Guest chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
LOVE IT! please write another soon!
David Fishwick chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
Brilliant idea and thanks for writing.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
Love it!
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Lula6791 chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
This is awesome! I loved it! I honestly didn't notice any grammar mistakes. I was to enthralled with the story. ;)
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