|Reviews for Don't Fall Asleep|
| StargazerLament chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
You should continue. It's really good. I shall be awaiting ch.2.
| Grp chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Luv it u must continue
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Oh my goodness, sorry this took me forever to read!
I don't even know where to begin! First of all I just want to hug Matthew and make him pancakes or cookies or something. Now I'm all sad and worried and everything for him!
Him imagining chibi Alfred was brilliant! I want a chibi Alfred in my mind :P (though I'd probably get annoyed by him pretty quickly...)
I love his interactions with Kuma! So perfect! And Kuma's all concerned and knows who he is :')
"I hope I never wake up." D: *cries* again, I just really want to hug Matthew.
AND you thanked me at the end? *GLOMPS* *flails* *glomps again* *squee*
but anyway I really really like it so far and I can't wait to read more!
| Aulophobic Clarinetist chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
ok so I totally reviewed and it said it posted, but then it didn't show up and fanfiction logged me out... :(
my review was long and full of flails and stuff!
but basically I was freaking out and wanting to hug Matthew and make him pancakes/cookies/whatever he wants and I'm all worried and sad and everything!
The chibi Alfred was brilliant and I want one (though he'd probably get annoying after a while :P)
The interactions with Kuma was absolutely wonderful and I love that Kuma's all concerned and knows who he is :')
AND I completely flailed over you thanking me at the end! *GLOMP* *FLAIL* *glomps again* *squeeee* thank YOU :D
I really really like it so far and I can't wait to read more! I'm intrigued and concerned and full of flails.
I hope that all made sense since I'm still kinda spazzing out, and if both reviews show up, awesome :P
Anyway...update soon! :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
*intence glaire at the review counter* where the H-E-double hockey sticks is my review I wrote the longest review on kimigaro... komi-komoinos. Moeness your awesome dicriptiveniss all kinds of stuff and if it dosent show up... -_- oh who am I kiding if it dosent show ill scream yell throw a fit throw my phone and you know what I still won't see the review oh misfortune
Well still wanna see the next chappy ;) ill be waiting
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
O_o ..." Canada Canada what's wrong hey get up" _glaire_ "what did you do to Canada! Oh its on now"
Luv luv luv this story and your wrighting stile also I likes the "weird azz curl" statement sence that's realty the best way to describe it is as just wonky lol any who you realy helped me feel what Canada was feeling and kimigo...kemi–...kokoros? Deep Concern for his owner we can tell that even with his broken sentences he's trying to say "don't go stay home I'm worryed about you" lol (something was definately wrong with this human) liked that to I also like how Matthew still thinks about his brother in a sort of rendering god-hes-so-anoying kind of way even though Alfred has pretty Mitch forgotten his existence OK ill stop rambeling now lol keep it up is there more I hope there's more you had better not keep this locked up in your flash drive :) ill be waiting
| Apple-Cola chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Please please continue!