Reviews for The Miles That Bind Us
Guest chapter 3 . 3/29/2014
this story is great so far keep it up
The Loved And Unloved chapter 3 . 2/27/2014
Lol, only two years XD Don't worry, I'm not judging haha.
Well, you haven't updated in well over a month...are ya gonna update soon? I like this story ;3

I hope you do update soon, I really do. I'll review every chapter! I promise :D

See ya soon (hopefully)

-Amber
AKA The Loved And Unloved
The Loved And Unloved chapter 2 . 2/27/2014
So cute! Teehee. Something about these two makes me smile ohh sooo much! :D

I'm so tired and I want to sleep, but I HAVE TO FINISH THIS NEXT CHAPTER OMG!

Just one thing though, when you're going into a different scene, could you indicate with lines or something like XxXxXx ? Not being rude, I swear :D

Hehe, off to the next chapter!

-Amber
AKA The Loved And Unloved
The Loved And Unloved chapter 1 . 2/27/2014
So good, soooo gooodddd omg

I love this pairing, and this show! You're makin' me all happy inside! :D Off to the next chapter!

-Amber
AKA The Loved And Unloved
regularshow565 chapter 3 . 1/21/2014
Awesome story! Definitely write more!
Clonearc17 chapter 3 . 1/17/2014
As a whole, the story is relatively well written. You really know what you are doing. Your leave of absence has changed nothing as Chapter 3 is just as good as Chapters 1 & 2.

The characters are relatively spot on. This all feels like things they would actually saw in the show itself. However, the fluff with Rigby and Mordecai feels awkward. I don't know how else to put it, but it is a minor complaint.

The story itself is intriguing. You are not over-doing and forcing the drama upwards, nor are you making a bland plot. I am actually interested in how the events of this story unfold. I love the idea of Mordecai's dad and the venture feels justified.

Though this is just a personal preference, I do not think the story is focused enough on Mordecai and Rigby. I loved the majority of the interaction between the two, but it the rest feels like a post-add on. Chapter 3 spent way more time and focus on Margaret, Eileen, Benson, and Skips than it did Rigby and Mordecai. The transitions between each frame of reference need to be more adherent. It seems like the scene jumps with no clear transition. In chapter 2, I read three or four lines of dialogue thinking it was Mordecai and Rigby's instead of Eileen and Margaret's.

However, my complaints are minor. This story is relatively great, perhaps even superb. To those of you who read reviews before reading a story, I would definitely give this a read.

Two solid thumbs up.
CoolerTHEMANPLZ chapter 3 . 1/14/2014
I love the story so far! Keep up the good work! ;)
Zenna chapter 3 . 1/14/2014
Nice little story you've got going here. I'm totally gonna watch the progression of this one.
TheForgottenSoldier chapter 3 . 1/12/2014
This review is for chapter 3:

Good quality of writing as always. One thing you should keep in mind though, is the use of line breaks. Use them during the transitions of Mordecai and Rigby's trip and the park life. You can find them in the doc manager.

There were also some cases where you mispelled a word or forgot, but it was one or two times in this chapter.

Good luck with the next chapter!
TheForgottenSoldier chapter 3 . 1/11/2014
Goddamn. It's been so long, I'm going to have to reread this. Glad to see you back!
diritto2000 chapter 3 . 1/11/2014
looking forward for more! nice story I'm happy you are working on it again
MetallicTaste chapter 3 . 1/11/2014
Great! Short and sweet like you said, but it gets the ball rolling again. Glad to see from you again!
cupidgirl chapter 2 . 11/24/2013
i love it!
xXOliveOilXx chapter 2 . 10/12/2013
I like it. Finish it
benson-fangirl31 chapter 2 . 10/2/2013
MORE!
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