Reviews for Mana Khemia: Alchemist of AlRevis Akuma Within
OSR fanatic chapter 8 . 2/15/2013
Great Story! :) Update Soon! :)
kalakauai chapter 8 . 8/1/2012
Nice chapter. but it would be nice if you could add Naruto's Ninjutsu
kalakauai chapter 7 . 8/1/2012
kalakauai chapter 5 . 8/1/2012
When will Naruto unleash his Rasengan?
kalakauai chapter 4 . 8/1/2012
... okay... who is Silwest?
kalakauai chapter 3 . 8/1/2012
I see some mispelled words in this chapter. Proof read when you make the next chapter.

"Yeah, if we do we get a free fight to see without having to pay." Naruto says.

"…..Where did you get the popcorn from?" Vayne ask.
kalakauai chapter 2 . 8/1/2012
It's just short... so are you going to add more Naruto characters in the story?
Eng prof chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
English fail... Clean it up and I will give it a go...
Guest chapter 8 . 8/1/2012
Pretty nice.
RoyalTwinFangs chapter 7 . 7/29/2012
Pretty nice update.
Siri chapter 7 . 7/29/2012
Awesome! I think there are issues with ff because I can't post comments. Anyway, interesting chapter, I can't wait for what happens next!
David chapter 6 . 7/12/2012
Fun chapter, the adventure continues. There were a few minor errors, but all that aside it was a entertaining chapter. :-)
David chapter 5 . 7/8/2012
Good chapters. I'm gone a day and I get to read 3 new chapters :-)
I never played the game, but your fic is really good.
Enjoy the rest of the weekend. (hrs to minutes)
Killer Puppy chapter 5 . 7/8/2012
Fun story, love it. Funny thing... I have no idea about the other stuff aside Naruto. Still, makes things interesting. If this is an anime, I'm probably going to watch it now. The fic is entertaining and comes with fast update, so I'm pretty happy. Good job!

Killer Puppy, cute yet deadly.
InfinityAtmo chapter 5 . 7/8/2012
this is basically rereading silver frostwolf's fic, "Mana Khemia: Okami Alchemist of Al revis"
almost word for word, with some lines taken out...and the grammar
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