Reviews for Simba as a Cub
Faithios chapter 8 . 8/2/2012
Haha, that was a close one! I like how he got the antidote just in time! And I also like how it reminds us not to be in too much of a hurry to grow up. Nice!
mimoo01 chapter 8 . 8/1/2012
Woot the story is finished! Nice job addimg the part were San asked Bout the rum! Lol!
Cool Overdrive is going to be finished! It was a wonderful way to end the story! XD
5 chapter 7 . 7/29/2012
DJ chapter 7 . 7/29/2012
LOL Simba hitting it on with Sarafina. Good work.
disappointed 2012 chapter 7 . 7/26/2012
Oh my goodness... That was, uh... Weird. I mean, Simba and Sarafina gettin it on while they're drunk? O.o interesting.
mimoo01 chapter 7 . 7/25/2012
Oh no the action is rising! I love it! Lol that was a funny scene between Simba and Sarafina at least she can't get pregnat! Great chapter! Keep up the great work! XD
5 chapter 6 . 7/19/2012
Meh "But My Lady?" sounds swdish
DJ chapter 6 . 7/19/2012
I like the part where Sarafina tells Nala to Shut up.
LionKingFactsGuy2 chapter 6 . 7/19/2012
...okay I guess this is good so far.
disappointed 2012 chapter 6 . 7/19/2012
"Mom you're sober." Nala grinned.
"Nala dear."
"Yes mom?"
"Shut up."

Ahaha, had me rolling! I loved it! Great job on the last few chapters!
petitprincess chapter 6 . 7/18/2012
Is Contra the villain? If he is, I knew there was a reason I liked him. You're doing good so far. Although, there are some parts where I can't tell when the dialogue ends. I'm just saying
mimoo01 chapter 6 . 7/18/2012
Lol! My favorite part was when Sarafina told Nala to shut up! Your doing a great job making up the rest of the story.
DJ chapter 5 . 7/18/2012
HA HA Simba shows middle finger.
5 chapter 5 . 7/18/2012
I remember this chapter
mimoo01 chapter 5 . 7/17/2012
Yay Nala is pregnat! Sorry for the late review I was busy.
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