|Reviews for Untamed|
| WyldClaw chapter 18 . 8/9/2020
| WyldClaw chapter 12 . 8/9/2020
Whoa. That’s is a lot for Rochelle to take in
| Vortexswirl chapter 25 . 7/13/2020
I can't literally continue. Why is she so bratty. I really wanted to like your story. It's long, well written. For crying out loud, why doesn't this MC get any character development?
| 1412 karasu chapter 60 . 5/14/2020
I’ve literally cried nonstop ever since Keane was shot... how dare you do this to me /3
Thank you for writing such a beautiful story :)
| Keleri chapter 11 . 5/14/2020
""You're a pokémon, not a person. But duh, I want to see you.""
Pokemon are people and humans are people!
The sibling banter is WAY too real, omg xD
WHAT IS HAPPENING NOW
| Keleri chapter 10 . 5/14/2020
"The world is not peaceful because it cannot ever be equal. No one can ever be truly satisfied. We are always craving something more, whether it is power, possessions, or freedom. We are never satisfied with what we have, who we are, or what we have acquired. People seek ways to satisfy any emptiness and take on ambitions they have the will to power but no power to accomplish. And those who do have the power use it corruptively to enforce their beliefs and fulfill their desires without any regard to anyone else's."
Yooooo it's not "people's" fault! People are basically good, it's the rich sociopaths among us doing shit like this :O
Why IS it just Rochelle! Sounds like her siblings and friends and everyone in the region could have been equally in line for some poke-lycanthropy.
| Keleri chapter 9 . 5/14/2020
Woooow, this has been a rollercoaster few chapters, I was very upset/relieved by the fight-dream and now upset again by how Rochelle's parents aren't standing up for her and taking her distress seriously. :( AND NOW WHAT
| Keleri chapter 6 . 5/14/2020
"We had started seeing an irregular pattern in the torrential weather and how it was bringing foreign and sometimes rare pokémon over."
Oh ho, disturb not the guardians
All the sibling roughhousing is reminding me too much of being a kid, lol. Don't fight ya lil hooligans!
| Keleri chapter 5 . 5/14/2020
"There had been a terrorist attack on the Magnet Train taken from Saffron City to Goldenrod City."
Oh shit, things get real!
I'm set off by the sibling banter in this one, it's too real and triggering my Oldest Child instincts to restore order among the siblings :D
Oof, Jacoby's pokemon's nicknames are too 16-yo Boy for me to handle lol
| Keleri chapter 4 . 5/14/2020
""We only want what's best for you, Chelly, and we know you want to be a pokémon trainer, but you're not ready and—""
GAHHHHHH I HATE PARENTS
I'm surprised Rochelle hasn't run away from home by now to be honest.
| Keleri chapter 3 . 5/14/2020
"She had given me the wrong phone number."
Oh no :( I know Chelle is... Chelle, H, but that's cold.
"A signed registration slip, allowing Trevor to take summer classes."
WHAT THE FRICK
| Keleri chapter 2 . 5/14/2020
"How could they forget something like that? That's major, right? Like, macho big? Why didn't I know this?" HMMMMMMM I AM SUSPICIOUS
Chelle is such a handful and I love Sophie. Some of Chelle's anecdotes might be nice to demonstrate in the narrative rather than be related as a Trust Me by her POV, but it certainly establishes her character well as this mile-a-minute blabbermouth :D
| Keleri chapter 1 . 5/8/2020
HEY like two years ago you reviewed some of my fanfic and I never reciprocated but I'm back after carving out a designated fanfic reading time for myself! SO NOW I WILL READ
I love Rochelle, she's got a strong narrative voice and a mischeivous streak a mile wide. It's neat seeing a character who's a demonstrated liar and troublemaker straight off ;) Can't wait to see what kinds of trouble she gets into!
| Katarena chapter 89 . 4/14/2020
Is Marina always like that, or is it because Rochelle keeps getting on her nerves?
Um...Rochelle? If there's a sign saying 'Don't disturb Sonny!', that means DON'T DISTURB SONNY. Not even when you want answers. Chances are Sonny isn't going to give them to her now.
Wasn't expecting Poona to turn up. Is Rochelle having a panic attack, or is the curse taking hold somehow?
| Mal chapter 89 . 4/13/2020
OH man. So excited! Poona!