|Reviews for Untamed|
| Cori Shadowfang chapter 41 . 7/20
I have to say that I really liked the part where Rochelle was thinking about how Sophie breaking also caused her reality to shatter. Really nice touch with that.
And Preen's back! Nice to see her again, and Rochelle getting the chance to interact with her siblings. Also kind of nice to see Rochelle's 'softer' side (because at the moment I can't think of a better word for it) in her concern for Sophie's well-being. I know she's been going through the story looking for her, but actually seeing the care-and seeing her put aside her own impatience, her honest desire to see her friend better-is really nice.
That ending hurts, though, and I hope that Rochelle manages to handle this...
| MAL chapter 41 . 7/17
Ah... Oh... I saw the end coming. Poor, poor friends. How sad.
Loved the rest of this chapter, though. It was fun and cute. :)
| Mudkipster chapter 41 . 7/15
STAY SAV SOPHIE
oh wait she lost her memory, what did they even do to her
If she lost her badass coldness I'm going to be so bummed but I guess it's unavoidable after all she's been through
Poor Chelle will have to see her friend is an entirely new person now :((
| Phairis chapter 41 . 7/12
Oh my god. Another cliff hanger. Well, at least it keeps me excited for the next chapter.
Sophie's awake but her memory is gone, ugh what does that mean for Rochelle? How is she going to deal with that? I'm super excited to see that.
Also, you're almost at 200! Omg that is so awesome we should have a party
| Phillip Harbindinger chapter 41 . 7/12
Good to know you're not dead.
| Cori Shadowfang chapter 40 . 5/31
Wait...Sophie's alive? (Maybe? Unless it's something moving under her...) But...that would be rather nice, honestly. Very nice ending with that.
And how will Poona's traveling with Meredith be explained to Lillian, I wonder? I suppose only time will tell...
| Cori Shadowfang chapter 39 . 5/31
Well...that ending isn't promising. Wonder how exactly they'll handle that, and if Corwin's okay.
I think, anywhere besides in a story, Corwin's thoughts on his father being purposefully targeted because he's a musician might seem sort of weird, and I'm a little torn right now as to whether his contemplations are valid or if this is showing a character flaw of his...
I feel like it's a rather good thing Keanne's on their side, and I'm guessing at some point we'll get to see his psychic powers in action-well, more than usual.
| Cori Shadowfang chapter 38 . 5/31
The budding friendship between Meredith and Lillian is already rather adorable. And, oh, Meredith, it's never good to give Rochelle ideas...
I really liked the imagery you used of a smile relating to Goldenrod City; how it seems beautiful, but there's something not-quite-as-much lurking beneath the surface. I'd also like to point out that the part where Lillian says she stays at the Pokemon Center because it's free and cheap is a little redundant; if staying at someplace is free, it's obviously cheap.
I DO wonder how Lillian will react when she discovers what's going on with Henrietta, though. And what'll happen when she learns Rochelle was keeping it from her...
| Phillip Harbindinger chapter 11 . 5/30
Pretty good so far. You seem to be using a few words you don't actually know the definitions for, though.
| Teraunce chapter 40 . 5/30
well this is certaintly an interesting story. following and faving to read more.
| honestly chapter 40 . 5/29
I relicanth raichu a good review...
because I haven't read the story past chapter 2. And this was a long time ago. Please take this feedback with a grain of salt.
I think its weird how she turns into a pokemon.
Until next time!
| Mal chapter 40 . 5/29
Good chapter. :) I wonder who left Sofy there... Creepy, but hopefully she is truly alright...
| Phairis chapter 40 . 5/29
Oh my god no, not another cliffhanger! Ugh, thats so evil! ... Not to mention this is worse than before. Ah well. It will definitely keep me tuned in for the next one.
I hope she is okay though...
| HiddenLore chapter 40 . 5/29
Poor Sophie, but at least she's moving. Who knows what that means.
Another good chapter, and I can't wait to learn more.
| Mal chapter 39 . 5/27
I could almost picture her with blue hair. and I liked this chapter. and the end! what a cliffhanger... Oops.