|Reviews for Shroud of Ashes|
| The Great Susinko chapter 4 . 1/9
Another awesome chapter. I couldn't help but squee like a fangirl when Zack decided to kiss Sephiroth. I see that you haven't been able to update this one in a while. Please don't give up on it! It's such a wonderful story!
| The Great Susinko chapter 3 . 1/9
Wow, your good. I have always wondered why there are so many brilliant authors on that are better than many published authors I have read. Great chapter. The part about Zack being weirded out by having to hold Genesis privates was a stroke of genius. I asked my husband how he would feel if something like that happened to him and he had to go pee. He just stared at me, horrified. That's how you know you've done a wonderful job!
| The Great Susinko chapter 2 . 1/8
This was a nice introspective chapter. I can see Hojo torturing Sephiroth because he named a lab rat. Did you mean a real rat or a human lab rat? I had to go and love my pet fancy rats after that. I love them and work hard on giving them good names. Again, I love how you characterize Sephiroth and Zack.
| The Great Susinko chapter 1 . 1/8
Wow. What an interesting story! I love the reactions of both Zack and Sephiroth. Hojo is the proper sadistic asshole. I wonder if Zack will get his body back. In the game, the lifestream healed Genesis, but at one point, Genesis said that a bit of Sephiroth's DNA would. I wonder what you will do...
| VioletIsInPain chapter 4 . 10/11/2013
hmm never thought i could hate Shinra more than i already do!
it must be really confusing for Zack, having to sort through all those emotions that are and are not his.
moving around in a body not his own too, that must suck on an unimaginable level!
also poor Sephiroth, EVERYTHING is just confusing , jumbled, and disjointed from what he knows to be true.
that cant be fun xC.
| surban75 chapter 4 . 9/8/2013
Please update soon! I have really gotten into this and can't wait to find out what happens next! I think your writing style is superb, detailed, but not too much that I get bored. I am quite interested in the degradation that Zack is suffering from.
Another thought came to mind that maybe it is a trap to get Seph for his S cells. That would fix the degradation, yes?
Anyway, keep writing, I am looking forward to the next chapter update!
| surban75 chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
I wasn't sure if I wanted to read this story, but you hooked me. Your characterization of Seph is very good and I am excited to see where this goes.
| Lia chapter 4 . 6/11/2013
Great stuff. Are we going to see Genesis and Angeal next chapter?
| Aurelia Cotta chapter 4 . 6/10/2013
Thanks for updating. This chapter was really sweet. Sephiroth being his ususal cold self even when Zack had a seizure, and then thawing out a little. Poor Sephiroth trying to do the right thing, then wishing Zack would put the moves on him... really, really sweet. And it wasn't saccharine, you struck a nice balance.
Looking forward for more.
| Moonlight Blizzard chapter 4 . 6/9/2013
Yay! Im sooo glad u update! Will we see genesis and angeal soon?
| matchynishi chapter 3 . 11/2/2012
Ooooh this is so interesting! can't wait to see where this will go!
| A Bittersweet Liar chapter 3 . 10/28/2012
WHY IS THIS SOOO WONDERFUL?!
I'm like in love with this. Seriously it's amazing. The way you write Zack, & Sephiroth. I love the plot, I love you writing style, the interactions between Zack & Sephiroth, and how so IN CHARACTER you get them to be!
And I can't believe that you've only written 3 chapters. I think I'm going to die from curiosity by the time you update the 4th chapter.
But anyways, back to the story, its really great. I like how Sephiroth is still somewhat suspicious of Zack, and how well you manage to depict the emotions of pain that Zack is going through.
Everything is perfect.
And I can't wait to see or read more of this.
| Kittencharmer chapter 2 . 10/23/2012
Visual, tactile, emotional. Poor Zack. And poor Seph, too-having to do battle with doubt, wanting to do what was only right!
| Madisuzy chapter 3 . 10/23/2012
Oh I love this! Original idea, fascinating storyline and wonderfully characterizations. I can't wait to see where this goes.
| DreamingIn2Eternity chapter 3 . 10/18/2012
Nice chapter! This is fantastic, please update again soon!