|Reviews for Ascension|
| MarionStrings chapter 5 . 7/13/2016
Hmm you have officially caught my interest it seems too me that it has a somewhat different take on this type of story please do continue if you could? :)
| Gissung chapter 5 . 11/6/2015
i'm really enjoying the story i can't wait for the next chapter. i hope you can get your muse to stay long enough to finish the story :)
| Gioiosa.del chapter 5 . 4/11/2015
Please update again soon
| Kazuto Emiya chapter 5 . 3/31/2015
| Zentari2238 chapter 1 . 3/3/2015
He has a fire in him ,he concludes . Probably from getting his teethe knocked out one too many times like a little pooch , me thinks.
Protip, while going mary sue is annoying , going all out pathetic is bad too .
| pwashington chapter 1 . 2/13/2015
| AbsenceOfTruth chapter 5 . 2/8/2015
Such a good read, like all the little stories in between to give the characters more depth! Please keep it up!
| AbsenceOfTruth chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
Nice introduction, Petty dark and edgy character you have, I like it. Can't wait to read more!
| Animemonk chapter 5 . 2/6/2015
holy shit your back from the dead and here I though I was the only one who came back from the dead. bro great chapter. and so I am still a year behind oh well. I swear that if you need a few ideas I will see what I can pull out of my ear. btw you will be surprised what you can find in my ear. like a small braclet with a diamond on it someone shoved in my ear after I passed out in the park but anyways glad to see you back
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/31/2015
Can you make one of his sekeri die? For example make shi die. It will be great charcter development for him
| marlastiano chapter 5 . 1/30/2015
| Mr. M0j0 chapter 5 . 1/29/2015
Really liking the characterization of Norois Sekirei and the direction the stories headed so far, keep up the good work. As for Shi not being a character on this site, you can send character addition requests via email to this site. That's what I've been trying to do for a few characters also
| godzillafan1 chapter 5 . 1/29/2015
that black haired girl a sekirei too? she gonna be will's sekirei as well? well I hope you write more chapters soon.
| Lord Asmodeus chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
Argh he was too disgustingly kind...
And god seriously 'beating up bullies' and 'bad people' is he a utter complete retard?
How childish, there is evil in every sentient creature in existence...
So mhm so why isn't he 'beating up' all of them?
Also you should maybe learn about the human psyche; abused children either become attention craving or antisocial sociopaths...
Not whatever the fuck he is...
| Masquerade man1234 chapter 4 . 5/6/2014
Good story , can't wait to read more of it .