Reviews for Ascension
Blake2020 chapter 4 . 8/18
interesting please update in 2017 of August and I know been a long time coming but please update future wise as well?
Blake2020 chapter 3 . 8/18
nice chapter
Blake2020 chapter 2 . 8/18
nice
Blake2020 chapter 1 . 8/18
good
we the people chapter 2 . 5/13
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MarionStrings chapter 5 . 7/13/2016
Hmm you have officially caught my interest it seems too me that it has a somewhat different take on this type of story please do continue if you could? :)
Gissung chapter 5 . 11/6/2015
i'm really enjoying the story i can't wait for the next chapter. i hope you can get your muse to stay long enough to finish the story :)
Gioiosa.del chapter 5 . 4/11/2015
Please update again soon
Kazuto Emiya chapter 5 . 3/31/2015
More
Zentari2238 chapter 1 . 3/3/2015
He has a fire in him ,he concludes . Probably from getting his teethe knocked out one too many times like a little pooch , me thinks.

Protip, while going mary sue is annoying , going all out pathetic is bad too .
pwashington chapter 1 . 2/13/2015
Interesting
AbsenceOfTruth chapter 5 . 2/8/2015
Such a good read, like all the little stories in between to give the characters more depth! Please keep it up!
AbsenceOfTruth chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
Nice introduction, Petty dark and edgy character you have, I like it. Can't wait to read more!
Animemonk chapter 5 . 2/6/2015
holy shit your back from the dead and here I though I was the only one who came back from the dead. bro great chapter. and so I am still a year behind oh well. I swear that if you need a few ideas I will see what I can pull out of my ear. btw you will be surprised what you can find in my ear. like a small braclet with a diamond on it someone shoved in my ear after I passed out in the park but anyways glad to see you back
Guest chapter 2 . 1/31/2015
Can you make one of his sekeri die? For example make shi die. It will be great charcter development for him
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