|Reviews for To do trouble!|
| Tigressa chapter 17 . 2/12
OMG I love this story plz plz plz update!
| Silent reader chapter 17 . 10/17/2015
I just love this story...It's really different from all the other stories in a way...
Sub-plot? Hm... Maybe a...I really don't know..Maybe a truth or dare game where some funny things about the characters can be revealed..Your choice..
My day was good, yet not good as well...Got a lot to learn...
Continue this story..
| Coneofwonders chapter 16 . 4/29/2015
Okay, I gotta say I'm loving this so far. Excellent job. Can't wait to see more of it :D
| Tigergirl713 chapter 17 . 4/28/2015
I absolutly love this story, im not sure what i want to see maybe a food fight or truth or dare or something, and my day was okay so far
| Tigergirl713 chapter 16 . 1/28/2015
Omg I love your story plz update!
| Da'SaVage-Tiger chapter 2 . 8/29/2014
NOTE FOR ALL READERS: This story does not have Lemon! I was over exaggerating and owe the author an apology. If anyone is reading this, please read on in the story! ;D Thank you!
I have decided to remake the review, which I will use a way of saying i'm sorry to the author. ;D
Chapter 1: There are a few minor spelling/grammer errors in this chapter. I have been trying to go back and forth to see them, but I didn't want to spam chapter 1 views on your screen. So I will simply tell you where I have seen them:
-The scene where Tai Lung breaks into Tigress' room and leaves.
-And you added a extra or missed a letter in a few words. Like the part where you added the Aids note: Here? You meant her at that part I think.
-And a few other places. :/ (Sorry if I wasn't clear enough on this one)
There were also runoff sentences that needed coma's, for example: "Tail Lung got up. Hid everything and went to bed. It's not like anything could happen."
It should be rewritten like this: (Bold words mark replaced words) "Tai Lung SAT up, hid everything, and then went to bed. After all, it's not like anything could happen, right?"
Again, this is not criticism. It is merely a correction.
Sense this story isn't seemingly a serious one, I will not lecture you about characters being OOC, (A.K.A out of character) language, so don't worry about that one, your okay. :)
And last but not least. When you are switching character perspectives, make sure to add LINE BREAKS. Character change example: Tai Lungs room to: Tigress' room in the morning. Or a time change: Hours later? Change this to a line break so people know that time has past, or it just gets confusing. Plus, authors notes in the middle of a story get annoying after a while. (From my perspective.) Author's notes like: "AND BAM, TIGRESS HAS AIDS." shouldn't have to be added. They are not apart of the story/subject, and should not be added until the end or the beginning of a story. (Again, just my opinion)
Again, I see more grammar and spelling mistakes. And this time, I know where they are:
-Check the part where Viper chases Chase, there a few there that i see. If you don't see them, let me know, I will show you.
-More parts where you added a letter or forgot one, but not many of these.
I love the part where Viper and Tigress run after Chase! ROFL! XD Love it! And the awkward moment where they kiss... love it. You are good with these romance moments, I have to say. Interested to see if there relationship goes further.
Don't really have much else to add, except make sure to add line breaks in between time changes or characters perspective change, and don't add author comments in the middle of the story! But again, it's your story, YOU are the author, do what you want. :)
Overall, love the humor, the romance. And I wasn't even bothered by the one part in the alley with that leopard. Now that i think back to it, it was actually kind of funny.
| Da'SaVage-Tiger chapter 1 . 8/29/2014
Alright Xfunny, I did say I would review every two chapters... but unfortunately, even though I am only at chapter two, this story is just too adultish. For one, you had very inappropriate content on chapter two, even though it was rated T... And I am glad that I didn't even read the whole thing... there is a good reason for the rating M in fan fiction. (Sorry, but it's true) :/
First off, sexuel/lemon content is supposed to be for a RATED M, story. Not a rated T one. I thought the story would be good... but with adult content, I simply refuse to read the other following chapters. Rated T means kids up to age 13 can read it, (Which is how old I am) which means NO ADULT CONTENT! (Sorry for the caps, but it's true) I highly recommend you change the rating on this if you will continue this story, this is just too much... I just can't, i'm sorry. :/
If you did not include this content, I would've been more than happy to review, but this... I don't even know what this is... it's porn.
I'm sorry, but I can't do any more. :(
| Da'SaVage-Tiger chapter 16 . 8/28/2014
(This message is not for the Author,except the P.S message) Tekan, Ghost, you guys need to be more respectful to the lady. -_- I may not have read this story yet, but I did take the time to type this review, because you guys were going around, acting like jerks! Lay off with the harsh comments, I mean, seriously! I don't know what your problems are with Mitchicus and Xfunny, they are regular writers just like us, writing regular stories, so lay off! If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say it at all.
P.S To Xfunny: I am glad that Mitch is back, he is an awesome writer. ;D
| The Shadow chapter 16 . 6/7/2014
Awesome! I wonder what will happen when Shifu funds out that they got drunk! O.O
| LadySindrak chapter 16 . 5/25/2014
It has been quite a long while, but it's wonderful to see a new chapter after so long! :D
| GHOST435 chapter 1 . 5/25/2014
Sorry to say ... wait I'm not sorry this is bull shit.
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/13/2014
When are u going to put up the nxt chapter
| Remedy's Melody 109 chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
tht was pretty good. loved the part where monkey said that they had guts to enter tigress's room
| XxDarkCrazyCatxX chapter 15 . 10/1/2013
This chapter was sad and funny at the same time. keep up the good work.
| The Shadow chapter 15 . 7/22/2013
That was an awesome song! You're a really good songwriter. Love this story, can't wait for the next chapter!