|Reviews for Zero's Noble Overlord|
| Primus2021 chapter 22 . 12/4/2017
It might have been better if Henrietta lied to the public and said that ... ...
Sauthoth's Ancestor had betrayed Tristain and had been killed for it, thus the families Noble status as the "Overlord of Valois" was stripped from them 3000 years ago or so, thus making his descendants Disgraced Nobles.
Then she could say that Sauthoth was the first to seek to reclaim his families Title of Overlord and the Deed to his Home in Valois, and so Henrietta had given him the job to be Louis Bodyguard and to preform missions for the crown until he could prove himself 'Loyal to the Crown' once more, where he would then be rewarded with what he was seeking.
Next she could say that Sauthoth charging into the Battle of Tarbes with his Dragon Riding Goblin army and Saving Tristain would be seen as the highest form of Loyalty to the Crown and so he would be rewarded for it.
Lastly she could say that Sauthoth saw Louis as a daughter and his Heir-apparent, and that he would most-likely kill anything that dared to harm her.
This also might have been more plausible then what was written in this chap, as it doesn't take into account where the Black Knight's Army came from nor why the Goblins answered his call, or even why they listen to Louis.
| Primus2021 chapter 18 . 12/4/2017
more like "A bright little girl happily chatting away to her dark giant knight of a father." lol
| Thedudeist chapter 15 . 11/21/2017
That was nice, most fanfics never do anything nice for henrietta. She always ends up the most miserable out of everyone at the end of the story.
| Thedudeist chapter 12 . 11/21/2017
this is pretty amusing, wonder how his presence will change the story.
| Thedudeist chapter 3 . 11/19/2017
obligatory guiche fight, this is pretty funny.
| Boi chapter 32 . 6/20/2017
I will always remember you ;-;
| AloofEyeball chapter 31 . 5/31/2017
Inspector Dadget is made of win and love.
| Blooddragon332 chapter 1 . 5/8/2017
someone try and continue this!
| DeafVaderWattpad chapter 1 . 4/29/2017
Am I the only who thought Morgan Freeman in chapter 1, with the voice?
| ebbuu chapter 3 . 3/16/2017
"That'll do pig, that'll do."-Babe
| RedKnight21 chapter 32 . 1/20/2017
This was awesome. Both the writing and story were great. To bad it was discontinued.
| Alpha701 chapter 15 . 8/18/2016
Okay, I'm starting to think that Snarl is like evil Yoda. They're both small, or short, green, and they speak the same way. Am I wrong?
| Doomeater chapter 10 . 6/25/2016
This is awesome and hilarious! And using Gnarl as the narrator is a really cool choice! Keep up the good work and have a lovely day
| Paxloria chapter 22 . 5/26/2016
Louise now has 1 ring, but without a second ring there will be no glow to illuminate thwe spells in the book.
| Paxloria chapter 18 . 5/26/2016
HA hA hAHa HAAA!
This was Great! Your BEST chapter Yet!