Reviews for The Girl Who Sat Alone |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story. The interactions between the characters were charming and well done. I particularly like the way you had Rin and Tei become friends instead of going down the "Tei turns into a psycho" route. I think it was very sweet and I like how the story ended happily for everyone involved. Nicely done! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() How the heck Neru got there?! I thought Rin said they're few towns away from the town where Rin lives now... I'm at my so called "Confusion" state... |
![]() ![]() World is Mine - Miku and Kaito Go Google It - Gakupo and Luka Honey - Meiko Butterfly On Your Right Shoulder - Len and RIn |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow am I actually seeing a Rin who is a badass? That's awesome! In most fanfics I have read so far Rin is such a wimp at times D: but she's suppose to be RIN THE AWESOME ROADROLLER GIRL. Lol pardon me. |
![]() ![]() I'm not sure but I think... xP Miku and Kaito - World is Mine Luka and Gakupo - Go Google It Rin and Len - Butterfly on Your Right Shoulder Meiko - Honey Haha... I'm not so good with guessing songs... " |
![]() ![]() I love this story! o And I love the songs you put it in the story, I imagined this story to be in real life (well, in manga/anime form though), and now I'm rolling on the floor out of happiness XD oh yeah, the songs are : KaiMi : World is Mine Meiko : Honey, Honey GakuLuka : Go Google It (maybe) RinLen : Migikata No Chou - man, I'm blushing when I remember the real song 'cause I know the meaning of the lyrics.. / ehehehe ;) & Rin Rin Signal |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Mostly I have positive feedbacks! Thinking of connecting real life experiences to a story is quite amazing. Some people don't understand that these things are eventually occuring. Don't ask me how I know it. I have drama occuring in my mind. Continue doing your best! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like what happened to Tei. Haha at least she isn't all that scary. Now that Len and Rin are together, I'm sensing a lot more arguments coming from them too soon. Nevertheless, I don't think I can comment much, considering I hardly found any flaws here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok... miku and kaito sang THE WORLD IS MINE... luka and gakupo sang GO GOOGLE IT... meiko sang HONEY... and rin and len sang BUTTERFLY ON YOUR RIGHT SHOULDER |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tei is so . . . well, messed up, and stalkerish O.o BUT LOVE THE STORY 33 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I died of fluff! :3 I couldn't stop laughing at the last few paragraphs! This is why I favourited you. |
![]() ![]() len len dont do it noooooooo he said yes sigh |
![]() ![]() rin chan! len kun is stalking you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cheers, because both you and I can dance so well. Sad little ending to the chapter. Nice job. |