|Reviews for The Lost Ones (ON HOLD)|
| Rosykiller chapter 14 . 9/10/2013
Splendid! Update soon please :)
| Guest chapter 14 . 6/24/2013
This was boring:(
| Naynay1130 chapter 13 . 12/31/2012
| Queen of Air and Darkness chapter 12 . 12/1/2012
Thanks for the long chapter! There were also very few grammar/spelling mistakes in here, which I appreciate. Just wanted to say that in regards to this line:
"It's in latin, so you'll have to refresh your native language a bit."
That's not correct. If Puck's native language was Latin it would imply that he (and the Seelie/Unseelie myths in general) were ancient Roman myths, which is not correct. Puck's native language would be English or a type of Gaelic (either Irish or Scottish) if any human known language, because the Seelie/Unseelie myths are from the British Isles. I know you probably didn't know this; a lot of people don't. I just thought I'd tell you. :)
| aishachase97 chapter 11 . 11/22/2012
Awww! So cute! Update soon!
| Naynay1130 chapter 11 . 11/21/2012
Awww. Nice. I like this chapter. Puck and Willow sittin in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G!
| Are.you.okay.Annie chapter 10 . 11/21/2012
O This is really good PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I love puck!
| aishachase97 chapter 10 . 11/19/2012
CURSED? CURSED?/ OMG NOOOOOO! DON'T LET HER DIE! I WILL CRY IF YOU DO!
| Naynay1130 chapter 10 . 11/17/2012
NO! Willow! Why?! Grr. Post soon. Pleeeeaaase?
| Naynay1130 chapter 9 . 11/15/2012
Nice chapter. Well written. Well thought out. Very good. I loved it.
| JLdark chapter 9 . 11/14/2012
Your story is so good, can't wait for more, Inspecially like how Puck reactions are, I hope Willow has more romance moments with Puck.
| aishachase97 chapter 9 . 11/11/2012
:D update soon please!
| xX Blood-Bond Xx chapter 8 . 10/28/2012
The story is interesting but needs more detail in surroundings and a little more in looks.
| aishachase97 chapter 7 . 10/13/2012
Oh My Gosh! YOU NEED TO UP DATE AND SOON!:D cant wait! I love it! :D
| aishachase97 chapter 4 . 10/13/2012
Babys mama! ahhaha funny... :D