Reviews for Trip to the Capitol
cam chapter 21 . 4/2
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TheMockingjayLives100 chapter 23 . 3/29
Amazing story! you know Im not that used to cashmere and gloss being good guys but it was a nice change!
stillwaiting61 chapter 4 . 3/5
I know it's been awhile since you wrote this story, but I have to tell you I enjoyed reading it and the one before this. All this drama and teenage angst is fun to read! I bet Joanna gets drunk, but I'd like Clove to get drunk so someone could beat her a**! ;)
obsessedchick44 chapter 24 . 12/13/2014
loved this!
Mindymb83 chapter 23 . 11/18/2014
I love your stories! I can't wait for the las story of the sequel! If is not to much to ask, I would love to see a stronger connection between Peeta and Katniss... they seem a bit off to me ( especially since their original relationship in the books is so strong). Hope you update soon!

Mindy
MRM24 chapter 17 . 4/13/2014
OMG, Gloss is hilarious!
dominicana chapter 16 . 3/22/2014
i absolutley love your stories especially cloves stories her an finnick make me melt its 3 am and i still want to read more!
Bye-ByeBye-Bye chapter 24 . 3/2/2014
Luved it! I can't wait to read the next story :D
anonon chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
Hello! As a new reader, it's probably none of my business to be saying this, and I'll DEFINITELY write a legitimate review later, but have you considered tagging this story as "Complete"? Of course its sequel has only just come out so maybe it escaped your mind.
Guest chapter 22 . 2/4/2014
NO! KATNISS!
Carmelle chapter 24 . 1/27/2014
It was GREAT! However, I want some more Everlark in the next one. More relashonship happiness, not drama. Keep it up! (P.s. I know you have mentioned tou know about the gramatical errors, but you should stop using expect instead of except.) Make the next one as soon as possible!
kelster07 chapter 24 . 1/26/2014
I haven't read the prequel yet (oops... I will get around to it though), but I think that this story is really good. There were some minor grammar issues in a previous chapter (forgot where they were), but nothing overly distracting.
However, I loved the plot and drama. I really liked how every chapter was so filled and that every little sentence fit together to make a really good plot. Every character had a story and was important, adding to the overall product. You had me on the edge of my seat for the most, and I almost punched my laptop when Annie turned down Finnick. Man, them feels. But if not all things are good, then it's not the end, right? Yeah, I sound cheesy.
Your finale chapter really closed things off well and I can't wait to read more from you! Yes, I will read the two prequels and your sequel to this when I find the time. Great job! :)
S chapter 24 . 1/26/2014
Ooh, can't wait to read it!
Dqueendopia chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
When will u do the sequal?
tennantdeath chapter 23 . 1/1/2014
FAMILY LIKE PARENTS AND FANNIE AND CATO AND WHAT IS THIS I DONT EVEN KNOW
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