Reviews for Corporate Punishment
MagicRose713 chapter 4 . 7/25/2012
Great chapter! This was hilarious! Roxas cross dressing was genius! I like that... citrus boobs. Good one! Please update soon! I love this story!
OverByMidnight chapter 4 . 7/25/2012
"Shut up, citrus boobs!" x'D

I haven't ever really liked Roxas 'cause everybody's pairing him with Axel, but you make him cool xD

Aw, it's so cute how Larxene didn't want Luxord 'cause she had Axel in her mind after all... :3
Tonstaaar chapter 4 . 7/25/2012
You know I'm not a Luxord and Larxene pairing fan but they way you wrote it I would have been completely fine if they ended up together! I like how you've been writing Axel in these past chapters the tone and keep it up! Update soon!
Tonstaaar chapter 3 . 7/22/2012
Bloody Hell this is fantastic! I would have never thought after reading Office Space although I did wanted to see more into Axel and Larxene's hookup at the end of the story and this sequel perfect! Update soon!
SirenMist chapter 3 . 7/22/2012
I'm too lazy to login :/

DREAM TEAM XD Loved it! And Larx and Marlu's kidnapping scene was hilarious!

I actually like the idea of your more serious approach. The scenes in here are funny, but balanced well with the serious parts. I get a feeling this probably going to be a -for lack of a better word- darker plot. But not so much dark, maybe just more intricate with the whole Xehanort thing.

Loved this chapter! Can't wait for the next update!
MagicRose713 chapter 3 . 7/22/2012
This was funny. Poor Namine. I can't wait to find out what's coming next. I absolutely love this story!
Jillian Bowes chapter 3 . 7/22/2012
What are you talking about? This chapter was hilarious! Though I personally don't think Marluxia is gay, it certainly isn't inconceivable. Update soon! :)
OverByMidnight chapter 2 . 7/15/2012
Since this was a sequel, I had to go to check your Office Space fanfic, and whaddaya say, I got completely hooked and spent hours reading the whole fic at once... And loved every minute of it :33 *hands a plate of cookies for you*

Can't wait for the business trip... Are we gonna get a little romance there again? :3
SirenMist chapter 2 . 7/13/2012
I absolutely loved this chapter! Yay for more business trips! I wonder what you'll have our happy couple go through on this one ;)
MagicRose713 chapter 2 . 7/11/2012
Yay! Another business tip! Xehanort is seriously setting me on edge here. I love Larxene's little threat to Axel about a jogger finding him dead in a river. That was hilarious. Can't wait for the next update!
Jillian Bowes chapter 2 . 7/11/2012
I can totally feel the tension between these two. I just love the setting and their personalities. :)
Jillian Bowes chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
AHHHH! SEQUEL! YES! I am so excited about this! When can I be expecting an update? This story is awesome already!

(Pretty good timing, too. My boyfriend an I just broke up so I totally know how Larxene is feeling. Lol it's perfect!)
Keep it coming! ;)
MagicRose713 chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
Excellent! I like Larxy's style. Yeesh, Xehanort so creeps me out. He's got that undressing-you-with-his-eyes kindo of look to him. Anyway, great job! Can't wait for the next update!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
Awesome I loved your last story.. well office space I mean and I can't wait for the next chapter!
SirenMist chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
First: THANK YOU SO MUCH! I've been grinning so long just staring at my laptop that my sister asked if I needed an Asprin. Or a doctor.
2nd: So nice of you to throw me under the bus in your author's note.
3rd: After that chapter, I really don't think anyone's going to be disappointed, anyways. So I'm safe. For now.
4th:NOOOOO! Why? Why did they have to break up? This oughta be interesting to read.I love how you incorporated Xehanort into the whole thing. This story's going to be awesome!
Great job! Can't wait for the next update!
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