|Reviews for Amazing|
| BM originally chapter 11 . 3/3
I don't know if you are still into fan fiction, but I figured I'd give it a shot to let you know how much I enjoyed this story! I only recently got back into a Zorro kick after purchasing this favorite series of mine a couple of years ago. I was a little girl when this aired on TV originally and loved the series then, and after making my way through all 4 seasons as an adult, I still find it enjoyable! And so, when I get onto a kick on something, I always go digging around for fan fiction :)
You have a very realistic Alejandro, and I like how his character developed. From his initial anger to his not-so-sullen sulk, to his understanding Diego's reasonings and his own determination to reign in his temper (I liked the flashbacks to his wife scenes, too), and finally, to his confrontation-because I can understand his frustration here at the end, and of truth, Diego was allowing his fear to control him! Though I can't imagine that Victoria is going to take the announcent quite so well :) She won't have months to slowly come to reason!
Anyway, it was a great job, well done with good writing and believable characterizations, and I hope that eventually, the Zorro bug might nibble on you again sometime!
| overtherisingstar chapter 11 . 1/16
This is the best Zorro reveal story I've ever read (and I think I've pretty much read them all, there's way too little Zorro fanfiction out there)! I love how in character your Alejandro is, with his flashing temper and fierce love for his son. I also love the fact that you didn't have him confronting Diego about it immediately, but instead struggling with his temper and his worries while he waited for Diego to come to him about it. In short, quite simply an amazing story! Wish you'd written more Zorro fanfiction... ;)
Thank you for sharing your wonderful story, and kudos to you! :D This story is going in my Favorites AND in my browser bookmarks! 3
(I really loved that detail where Don Alejandro saw Zorro's smile on his own face in the mirror, btw. And the fact that it just made him angrier. XD So Alejandro...)
| ShadowWriter33 chapter 6 . 7/11/2015
I'm only to chapter six but this seems like a really good story so far, I like how Alejandro's working to control his temper and starting to appreciate his son a little more. I can't wait to see when the final confrontation takes place and Diego tells Alejandro it all and vise versa.
| mmkbrook chapter 11 . 6/27/2015
What except fantastic could one say about this story.
| KatieZfan chapter 11 . 5/5/2015
Sadie - I just re-read this story - it's been ages since I read all the Zorro stories before I even knew one could 'review'! I remember reading this before and thinking - WOW! You are a terrific writer! It's a wonderful story, well developed and VERY interesting. You have a great grasp of both story and character. I do hope you'll write more for NWZorro sometime in the near future!
| arty60 chapter 11 . 11/15/2014
A really beautiful and well done story. I hope that you will write more and soon!
| QueenNaberrie chapter 11 . 7/13/2014
Loved this! When Family Channel cancelled Zorro, I couldn't believe that they left us all on such an evil cliffhanger. I always thought that both Alejandro and Victoria started to wonder if Diego was Zorro towards the end. Diego as Zorro seemed to be hinting more and more to Victoria. It's almost like he wanted her to know even if he felt he couldn't outright tell her.
Thank you for writing this wonderful story.
| visions2share chapter 11 . 11/28/2013
What a great story! I really enjoyed it.
Thanks for the good read!
| PenrithPenPal chapter 11 . 5/1/2013
I enjoyed it immensely. You wrote a great story.
| Alethea Aethelreda chapter 11 . 12/22/2012
I loved it! I admit that chapter 10 was a bit hard to take, but you resolved it nicely. I especially liked how you wove the events of the episodes in so neatly with your own content. Nice chapter titles, too. Thanks for sharing!
| noagnes chapter 11 . 12/19/2012
This is really one of my favourite Zorro stories. Absolutely wonderful! I just love your take on Alejandro and the way he changes after his realizations, and the way you follow the episodes with his secret knowledge of his son's identity. Beautiful father/son relationship! Thank you very much, and please write more, if you have the inspiration!
| Your Worshipfulness chapter 11 . 12/15/2012
Such a great story-I love these alternate universe fanfics. Yours actually got me thinking; how would it have been if Gilberto had been a little bit more like Elena than Alejandro. What if he had gotten to Los Angeles, ready to pursue his revenge, and then slowly gotten to know the de la Vegas-at first just to learn their weaknesses, but eventually beginning to question the things his mother had told him, eventually culminating in an understanding between he and the de la Vegas? Could be an interesting read.
| Gia1234 chapter 2 . 12/4/2012
| Gia1234 chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
I just discovered this part of the page. I am a fan of NW Zorro and you have gave me a great gift. Thak you! This is the first time I read a fic about zorro, and I love it!
| Obliviatus chapter 11 . 12/4/2012
Absolutely beautiful...and I am amazed at how you fit each episode's dialogue to your new interpretation of Don Alejandro's state of mind. This story fit into the season with such fluidity. Even your final scenes occurring after the series ended did not break continuity in any way. Bravo.