Reviews for A Study in Chaos
Tooncentric chapter 1 . 5/11/2018
I just finished this today and boy howdy, what a read! Just started this series but you seemed to have gotten Bonkers' dialogue down to a T by making it long and over dramatic.
Honestly, I loved the visuals that played in my head as well for this fiction and I really do love ALL the hard work you gave it! You gave the toon world a whole other side with the *insert spoiler here* and the way *insert spoiler here* work!
I hope to see you writing again one day!
Bri chapter 8 . 8/7/2015
I'll be honest, this is one of my favorite fics of all time. The way you wrote this made me feel like I was watching an actual cartoon- some of the word choices that stuck out to me was when Bonkers "delicately" sips his milkshake (I laughed out loud at that- can just see him being all sassy and dramatic at Lucky) and the part where you described the setup of the beach scene really played like a cartoon in my head. You're amazingly talented, and I've honestly never read a story before that READS like a cartoon. It's almost like you wrote in stage direction! Also, the original characters in this story are some of the best OC's I've ever read about, if not THE best. I haven't seen all of Bonkers so I don't know if the idea about the toons being able to totally change their appearance is canon or not, but I thought that was one of the most creative and well-implemented ideas that I've seen in a long time. And King Ring-a-Ding, man, THIS GUY! The way you talked about his cartoons made me wonder if he was a real cartoon star. Just such a creative idea, and such a funny character. His gag about talking on the phone honestly sounds like a real, old-time cartoon character. And Sugarfoot's such a great character, too- I could really envision his looming desk and his cartoony snap from calm to out of his mind in just a few seconds. You paint a really great mental image with your writing. Finally, your writing for Bonkers is so spot on I wouldn't be surprised if you were a writer for the show. His dialogue is fresh, hilarious, and completely in-character. I love his interactions with Lucky, especially, and I thought the ending was so funny when Bonkers thought Lucky was proposing! All in all, this is an amazing piece of work and you should absolutely be proud of what you've created. I give this story an 11 out of 10! You've made yourself a fan, and I'm going to recommend this fic to all my friends!
Reggie Jackson chapter 8 . 1/8/2015
So far, this probably the best Bankers fan fiction I've read in this section.
This could mistaken as a script for the finale episode of the show. You got everyone personalities down pact and a great simple story too. Like others have mentioned, Sugarcoat was a really good villain. I was actually quite surprised at the twist at the end. This story was pretty good a selling good comedic scenes along with some heartfelt emotional scenes.

This story manages to say a lot in eight chapters whereas others would might have taken twenty. A great job well done!
levy120 chapter 8 . 5/11/2014
Thank you! Thank you, thank you for finishing this, even if it took a while. This story was an absolute blast. One of the best fanfics that I have come across by now and you should know that )
Alana-kittychan chapter 8 . 5/6/2014
Aw so cute best ending for a fic ever!
Miner603 chapter 8 . 5/5/2014
This was one of my favorite cartoons when I was younger. To see this story in its completion and so very well done, I must say you did a damned good job. This was an incredible story especially for Bonkers. My only question is this, is Oswald the Deputy Mayor?
Bookworm Gal chapter 8 . 5/4/2014
That's a fantastic way to end the story. Finally Bonkers gets all the recognition and gratitude that he deserves. And that lazy jerk was demoted. That certainly proves that there is justice in the world. I can't even tell you how happy that I am to see such a wonderful and satisfying finish. Very nice job. Thanks for writing such a great story for us to read.
Someone chapter 7 . 5/3/2014
Please finish this story. I'm a huge fan of Bonkers, and you have done a really good job so far. Please finish!
Bookworm Gal chapter 6 . 4/8/2014
So I was rereading this story and I still absolutely love how well you've captured everyone's personality and crafted an entertaining mystery for them to solve. I honestly hope to see the end of this story in the near future. It would be a shame to leave things hanging. Good luck.
Miner603 chapter 7 . 9/1/2013
Please for the love of god update this again soon. Damn you cliffhanger.
Miner603 chapter 6 . 9/1/2013
Okay, with revision, I can understand why Sugarfoot isn't a horse.
Miner603 chapter 4 . 9/1/2013
My only issue with this is that Sugarfoot was a horse.
levy120 chapter 6 . 9/1/2013
Omg new chapters, and two at that too! It feels like I’ve been waiting forever on those xD

I seriously love everything about this story, the way and style that make it so unpredictable make it feel really unique. The way I’m literally gushing at every line of those makes reading where SLOW… but it’s still absolutely worth it x3

It’s so nice to see these faint little hints like the change in style and the toon-secrets; have a very ‘Popsclock-y’ feel to it 8D
Bookworm Gal chapter 7 . 8/31/2013
Wow, the wait for the next couple of chapters might have been a long one, but it was well worth it. That was an exciting couple of chapters and a horrifying cliffhanger. Poor Bonkers. The addition of Miranda Wright to the story was a nice touch. Overall, I am very impressed by this update and I look forward to more soon. Good luck.
Alana-kittychan chapter 7 . 8/30/2013
OMG not Bonkers D8 man been awhile from the last time I read this and wow so awesome
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