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DeepBlueJoy chapter 8 . 7/7/2014
Sometimes I love Xander. Stubborn and difficult, but no one I'd rather have my back, super or not.

He's like a burr. Once he's stuck, you can't get rid of him easily, and if you roll over, he sticks into your flesh and reminds you he's there. We all need friends like him.

Oh, and this line:
"none of them are as important as doing you."
omslagspapper chapter 48 . 7/6/2014
this is a chapter where that super cool ultra slayer axe stake could have been useful lol

aiiiie i knew this was gonna be a cliffhanger haha

things were going so well! i hope willow will be able to un mind suck tara before glory meets her end :p
Kitakana chapter 48 . 7/6/2014
So much drama! And a horrible cliffie as well. This chapter was so fast-paced and just really took off. And I have to wait another week to find out what happens next? So really, the anticipation is killing me. I cannot wait for the next chapter.

In other notes, man, Spike sure knows how to play the unweildy prisoner. I echo Xander's sentiments on the matter. He's impressive. I also love how you have Xander try to bulldoze the structure. That is actually logical and would have been great if it had worked.

So anyway, really good chapter!
DeepBlueJoy chapter 7 . 7/6/2014
OK, I'm so glad that I'm reading this knowing the next chapter is there for me though I probably won't read it tonight... cliffhanger. Evil! :-)

Quite a chapter!
DidiSummers chapter 48 . 7/6/2014
OMG! B almost fell, S save her but he fell O but he is a vamp he is it going to die, right? Right? Glory no more... Too much happened in this chapter too much, can't wait for next one... I want answers!

see ya! :D
DeepBlueJoy chapter 6 . 7/6/2014
Oh, premonitions are us. I just want them so badly to save her. Please tell me that some of the bad stuff can be undone? So much has changed. Please tell me that it changes things.

Of course, I'm tilting at windmills, since so much of this is already written... sigh. I know you have exciting ways of addressing things, so I'm going to be hopeful. Sadly, some things are just out of our control.

DeepBlueJoy chapter 4 . 7/6/2014
I always feel sorry for Ben until he cooperates.
Jedi SteelWolf chapter 48 . 7/5/2014
Once again - AMAZING chapter! (Hated the ending, but that's just because I hate cliffhangers.) Did Spike really just try to kill Glory by snapping her neck? Also, what happened to Xander in all of this? Did the minions get him and hurt him badly enough? So many questions, so few answers, at least until the next chapter. ;-) Another thing, I just wanted to mention how much I absolutely LOVED that Joyce was apart of the battle this time and how she held it together and even got off a few extra shots at (I'm assuming) the minions! Perhaps if all the minions died while they still have some chanting to do then the portal will close since the ritual is incomplete? Finally, I still don't quite get why Buffy's blood flowing from Spike worked for the spell since it wasn't his lifeblood? In the show, Buffy's blood/sacrifice worked because Dawn was made from her and I know they always say they are eachother's worlds, but unless they were somehow actually connected or something her blood still shouldn't have worked. (Unless you are saying that there is still some remnants of their "blobby" spell left over.) Well, I'll stop asking questions now but thanks again for a great chapter and I hope to read more from you soon!
SlayerDaniWho chapter 48 . 7/4/2014
Oh. My. God.


Seriously, though, brilliant cliffhanger. The momentum in this chapter had me white knuckling my Kindle. And lemme just say, I loved Joyce's awakening and badassness here. So nice to see her realize just what Buffy does, too.

But Spike, oh, Spike...I'm speechless. Absolutely speechless.

Always love to read your writing, it's just so natural...the scenery, the action and your characters, as usual, are so easy to picture in my head.
writerdragonfly chapter 48 . 7/4/2014
Brilliant. Just brilliant. Your writing is always so beautiful and emotive and UGH.

Love this.
EllieRose101 chapter 48 . 7/4/2014
Oh my goodness! Spike's violent antics to escape had me laughing so hard. Not sure who's more stubborn not to give up - him or Buffy.
SlayerDaniWho chapter 47 . 6/27/2014
Oh, it's so nice to see Tara play the part in bringing Buffy back out. I've loved the way you've characterized her throughout the series, she's such a strong and beautiful soul. And Willow's reaction when she learned that it was the "real" Tara? Just lovely.

Ben's feeling guilty (**insert evil laugh**) and Glory's admiring Spike for his tenacity. I can't wait to see who actually kills them off in the end.

You keep apologizing for drawing out the fight and the ending...I keep cheering because it means it's not over yet!
Illusera chapter 47 . 6/23/2014
I thought the beginning of the chapter was going to start with Spike, you fooled me there lol Then again Glory might not have hurt "her" key much without talking to him a little first... buts Glory was never very patient. I'm guessing the contaminated blood is what allowed him to be seen?

I'm a nervous about Glory being aware even when Ben is active now. It's going to be really difficult for him to escape; he'd need a heck of an opportunity. Didn't think we were going to see Tara in this chapter. At least now there's reassurance that she's still in there. Not in a very good place, but she's still there.
Kitakana chapter 47 . 6/22/2014
Nice chapter! I somehow missed seeing chapter 46 as well until now. Love how it is going and cannot wait for the next chapter!
writerdragonfly chapter 47 . 6/20/2014
This was wonderful. I got so caught up in it I was at the end before I realised I hadn't been copying my favourite sentences and passages or commenting as I went. You write so well and ugh.
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